Topic: what i see
fxx35's photo
Mon 07/07/14 03:26 PM
I look in the mirror and am surprised by what I see
The man who returns the stare does not resemble me

I ask myself who is the man on the other side
Has he gone though the mirror to find a place to hide

Was he chase over there afraid to face my fears
If he starts to cry will I see his tears

How long has he been standing there when did he come to be
Did he find happiness there or would he like to be set free

The mirror breaks glass cuts deep bloody chains fall from his wrist
he turns and gives a smile to me we fade into the mist

mig25's photo
Mon 07/07/14 05:06 PM

I look in the mirror and am surprised by what I see
The man who returns the stare does not resemble me

I ask myself who is the man on the other side
Has he gone though the mirror to find a place to hide

Was he chase over there afraid to face my fears
If he starts to cry will I see his tears

How long has he been standing there when did he come to be
Did he find happiness there or would he like to be set free

The mirror breaks glass cuts deep bloody chains fall from his wrist
he turns and gives a smile to me we fade into the mist


Deep . . .nice

no photo
Thu 03/02/23 01:23 AM
I look in the mirror and am surprised by what I see
The man who returns the stare does not resemble me

I ask myself who is the man on the other side
Has he gone though the mirror to find a place to hide

Was he chase over there afraid to face my fears
If he starts to cry will I see his tears

How long has he been standing there when did he come to be
Did he find happiness there or would he like to be set free

The mirror breaks glass cuts deep bloody chains fall from his wrist
he turns and gives a smile to me we fade into the mist

N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E

JulieABush's photo
Thu 03/02/23 03:01 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .