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seeds, growing in my mind
fragile in infancy taking more than I give giving more than I take living in a box this crooked little box where nothings even where sums don't add up where take aways cry where fallen words fallen moments fallen hairpins leave me in disarray |
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teasing, please let me be totally honest about this piece. This is so very powerful! So well constructed. So . . . with feeling.
Thank ye, teasing. I truly enjoyed this brief piece. I'm a lucky man to be reading your verse. Please always share more - ok? tomo / " The Island " === |
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Nicely done TB...
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Sat 06/28/14 02:10 PM
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Nice write....
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Another great piece of art,:-)
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seeds, growing in my mind fragile in infancy taking more than I give giving more than I take living in a box this crooked little box where nothings even where sums don't add up where take aways cry where fallen words fallen moments fallen hairpins leave me in disarray Loved it...in so many ways |
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tommy boy......your words are generosity itself...thankyou!
Ainjel....and you're nice to say so!
Up2Us....nice you...
thebucfan...you're sweet...
2KidsMom...your words are awesome to me,thankyou..
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Actually teasingbrunette..... you can always fall into my arms.
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you very much like to tease me
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Tue 07/01/14 10:44 AM
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you very much like to tease me
Is that like chilled wine Slow dancing in a soft rain Gently melting into each other passionately Beneath a blanket of stars.......
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perfectly teasing
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I really don't need to say it . . . but you know. One day I'll be able to write like this.
Love it |
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mig25...aww, that is very generous of you to write..& I thankyou from the bottom of my heart...
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