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Edited by
Up2Us
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Val Raindrop apologetic obsessions. Perplexed mysteries regress into bewildered torment. Contrite acid trips, meltdown exasperatedly. Time consumes her tarnished rambunctious soul. Twerking ridiculously, blind sunset humiliation. Victimized animation, relinquishing graffiti tears. Persecuted slave chained to a misinterpreted melody. Freedom becomes a pessimistic demoralized dream. Lifes hysterical ferris wheel, suspended between heaven & hell. She's got a ticket to ride, but I'm ok. Silverspoon nerd lost in a zealous Social Media. Her sabotaged exploited heroin homecoming . Vals' alluring exuberant suicidal addictions. Poem: MS�Copyright 2014 . |
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Val Raindrop apologetic obsessions. Perplexed mysteries regress into bewildered torment. Contrite acid trips, meltdown exasperatedly. Time consumes her tarnished rambunctious soul. Twerking ridiculously, blind sunset humiliation. Victimized animation, relinquishing graffiti tears. Persecuted slave chained to a misinterpreted melody. Freedom becomes a pessimistic demoralized dream. Lifes hysterical ferris wheel, suspended between heaven & hell. She's got a ticket to ride, but I'm ok. Silverspoon nerd lost in a zealous Social Media. Her sabotaged exploited heroin homecoming . Vals' alluring exuberant suicidal addictions. Poem: MS�Copyright 2014 . One day I'll be able to write something a deep as this |
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One day I'll be able to write something a deep as this Thank you my friend..... Your poems reach farther into the creative literary abyss.....deeper then mine on several different levels. |
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Great use of words Up2..
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Great use of words Up2.. |
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I could almost hear you saying the words......
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 06/22/14 07:51 PM
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I could almost hear you saying the words...... What if I wrote about....falling in love with you. Would you hear me saying the words????? . |
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...almost...
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...almost... Sometimes you have to read between the lines. Softly between the silence of each heartbeat, my heart whispers your name.... |
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you cannot know...how my heart needed your words.
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 06/22/14 09:03 PM
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you cannot know...how my heart needed your words. . |
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Wow, really crazy good.
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Thanks for reading tazz....
Thank you MariahsFantasy.... |
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I was just listening to this song, and thought about this write....
Amy Winehouse - Valerie http://youtu.be/namFjcOgHSE |
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I did not read the picture distracted me... to funny
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I did not read the picture distracted me... to funny |
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This still makes me laugh....
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