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I fight your urging to open my eyes in the hopes last night might never end. Your whispers... daring me to lay lifeless. I can’t keep my smile from showing you there is no place I’d rather be. Your tousled golden mane sweeps over your shoulder, plunges and rest delicately on the rise of your breast. Feather light fingers trail up and down my spine, ghostly chills follow. Your ardent body pressing against me. Photo flash images rifle through my mind, fanning the left over embers of a red hot seduction weeks in the making. In this morning light, I can almost pull the meaning of life from your eyes. You are the embodiment of spring with all its promise, washing the cold grey of a life of winters from my weary soul and I am more awake than I have been in years. kc`14 |
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ahhhhh...that morning light....wonderfully written...Cyn
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What woman would not want to wake up beside a man who is 'feeling' this way about her?....Smoldering piece (((((Kevin)))))
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C, thank you, thank you.
blondey, keep your eyes open. Leigh, 'feeling' is underrated. |
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Wow
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thank you CPFY...
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Wonderful awakening...nice!
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Laura...
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Edited by
MariahsFantasy
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Thu 06/12/14 01:09 PM
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kc, hi
First time I read a poem in a while where I had to read it over to make sure it actually happened. You are deep, I told you this. It's amazing how you let vulnerability take over effortlessly through the words. Whoever wakes up to this should be blessed to know someone like this actually exists, that it's not in some dreamland or story you can make up. Amazing writing! |
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"Feather light fingers trail up and down
my spine, ghostly chills follow." Dig it. These lines and the ending in particular are really great, man. |
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