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some days during the week I take a city bus
I watch her as she climbs on board tugging a handcart stuffed with a filthy red Miller's Lite tote bag I instantly hurt within myself for her she's wearing dirty black jogging pants, a purple sports bra and runners a scar runs up from underneath the waist of her pants to the top of the bra she runs a finger up and down the scar, up and down,down and up she has burns, scars, raised edges on her exposed skin a man stands up and gives her his seat she nudges my foot with her cart she says 'sorry' and smiles at me I return the smile saying 'it's okay' her teeth are darkened yellow, crooked, some missing I think her age could be thirty she's so thin, there's no where to hide I look at passengers, I see disdain, judgement, distaste it looks as if some are pretending she's not even there and my hurt for her increases her pain has no filter |
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You are indeed a gentle soul.
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Beautiful!
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tazzops....
thankyou.
Destiny41...thankyou
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Beautiful and deep
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some days during the week I take a city bus I watch her as she climbs on board tugging a handcart stuffed with a filthy red Miller's Lite tote bag I instantly hurt within myself for her she's wearing dirty black jogging pants, a purple sports bra and runners a scar runs up from underneath the waist of her pants to the top of the bra she runs a finger up and down the scar, up and down,down and up she has burns, scars, raised edges on her exposed skin a man stands up and gives her his seat she nudges my foot with her cart she says 'sorry' and smiles at me I return the smile saying 'it's okay' her teeth are darkened yellow, crooked, some missing I think her age could be thirty she's so thin, there's no where to hide I look at passengers, I see disdain, judgement, distaste it looks as if some are pretending she's not even there and my hurt for her increases her pain has no filter Lovely it is!!!! |
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Blondey111...thankyou
pkh..... thankyou
Laura10... thankyou
k....thankyou
hellsboy... thankyou
I appreciate everyone who takes the time to read.
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Loved it..... loved it, loved it....
Excellent write... 
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Up2Us....pleases me you think so....ty...
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So beautifully descriptive..
 (((((((teasing))))))
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some days during the week I take a city bus I watch her as she climbs on board tugging a handcart stuffed with a filthy red Miller's Lite tote bag I instantly hurt within myself for her she's wearing dirty black jogging pants, a purple sports bra and runners a scar runs up from underneath the waist of her pants to the top of the bra she runs a finger up and down the scar, up and down,down and up she has burns, scars, raised edges on her exposed skin a man stands up and gives her his seat she nudges my foot with her cart she says 'sorry' and smiles at me I return the smile saying 'it's okay' her teeth are darkened yellow, crooked, some missing I think her age could be thirty she's so thin, there's no where to hide I look at passengers, I see disdain, judgement, distaste it looks as if some are pretending she's not even there and my hurt for her increases her pain has no filter Awesome |
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2KidsMom...you're generous! ty
sypher770....thankyou!
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some days during the week I take a city bus I watch her as she climbs on board tugging a handcart stuffed with a filthy red Miller's Lite tote bag I instantly hurt within myself for her she's wearing dirty black jogging pants, a purple sports bra and runners a scar runs up from underneath the waist of her pants to the top of the bra she runs a finger up and down the scar, up and down,down and up she has burns, scars, raised edges on her exposed skin a man stands up and gives her his seat she nudges my foot with her cart she says 'sorry' and smiles at me I return the smile saying 'it's okay' her teeth are darkened yellow, crooked, some missing I think her age could be thirty she's so thin, there's no where to hide I look at passengers, I see disdain, judgement, distaste it looks as if some are pretending she's not even there and my hurt for her increases her pain has no filter There are no words for how your words move me. This was simply sorrowful yet compassionate. Teasing you are truly a gifted poet |
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aww,mig25,your words are like gems to me
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