Topic: So I
mig25's photo
Fri 05/16/14 05:50 PM
So I

The wind’s draft was cold
so I
closed the door
and darkened
your words
because they hurt so much
and I needed to hide
from the world
as I tried to understand

I wanted to be
more than just a moment
more than just a passing memory
while you waited
for a different tomorrow
at the expense of my hopes
so I
sheltered my heart within these four walls of loneliness

And this place
this quiet abode
doesn’t feel like home anymore
though it’s still similar to yesterday
and the laughter before then
so I
dreamed of then as I tried to understand
now




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Fri 05/16/14 05:55 PM
Nicely done flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 05/16/14 06:00 PM
mig...drinker

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/14 06:02 PM
:smile:

Kaleijoscope's photo
Fri 05/16/14 06:24 PM
I read it and i feel sad already... Mig25...thanks for sharing..

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Fri 05/16/14 07:19 PM

So I

The wind’s draft was cold
so I
closed the door
and darkened
your words
because they hurt so much
and I needed to hide
from the world
as I tried to understand

I wanted to be
more than just a moment
more than just a passing memory
while you waited
for a different tomorrow
at the expense of my hopes
so I
sheltered my heart within these four walls of loneliness

And this place
this quiet abode
doesn’t feel like home anymore
though it’s still similar to yesterday
and the laughter before then
so I
dreamed of then as I tried to understand
now






Ah Mig, this is so smooth, so poignant...Touching that place where love once lived...flowers

pkh's photo
Fri 05/16/14 08:19 PM
Touching and heartfelt

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Sun 05/18/14 05:35 PM
Excellent write.....smokinsmokin smokin

Cutiepieforyou's photo
Sun 05/18/14 06:01 PM
very well doneflowerforyou