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So I
The wind’s draft was cold so I closed the door and darkened your words because they hurt so much and I needed to hide from the world as I tried to understand I wanted to be more than just a moment more than just a passing memory while you waited for a different tomorrow at the expense of my hopes so I sheltered my heart within these four walls of loneliness And this place this quiet abode doesn’t feel like home anymore though it’s still similar to yesterday and the laughter before then so I dreamed of then as I tried to understand now |
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Nicely done
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mig...
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I read it and i feel sad already... Mig25...thanks for sharing..
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So I The wind’s draft was cold so I closed the door and darkened your words because they hurt so much and I needed to hide from the world as I tried to understand I wanted to be more than just a moment more than just a passing memory while you waited for a different tomorrow at the expense of my hopes so I sheltered my heart within these four walls of loneliness And this place this quiet abode doesn’t feel like home anymore though it’s still similar to yesterday and the laughter before then so I dreamed of then as I tried to understand now Ah Mig, this is so smooth, so poignant...Touching that place where love once lived... |
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Touching and heartfelt
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Excellent write.....
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very well done
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