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“To Late”
I swear by the stars and the moon. There will come a day soon. You will be able to see. How life is to be. You will be able to give. And learn again to live. There are things that come our way. We miss the meaning of them each day. In life we have our doubts. And look for our outs. At times we just want to hide. For it is our pride. That gets hurt. We should be on the alert. Times that we look though our eyes. We only want to see the lies. But then later we find out. Even though doubt. We were wrong. And we were wrong all along. But at times it is too late. I guess at times things are meant as fate. And can not be repaired. But still there is not doubt that you cared. But we must move on. For tomorrow is a new dawn. K.L.M 9/8/2007 |
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Beautiful read Txs.
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Beautiful,, Yes tomorrow is a new dawn a dawn of new learning and exploring,,,Hmmmmmmm life at times seems to bewillder all of us,,, hugs to you,,,,, ((( Puddin Cup ))))) |
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Karma thanks for reading
Denise yes it is a new dawn with new things coming our way. |
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you have such a beautiful way with words, this poem captures me. I really like the ending for I am a big fan of the sunrise, it is the time when the sun once again brings life to the our world. thanks for sharing your poem.
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move on with a new day with a new light, a past is dead and gone
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I hear you, , keep 'em coming, I'll listen, one day
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Txs
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hippyman thanky you for your words very much yes sunrises and sunsets are actually God's way of saying thank you each day. The sky is his cavas that he paints for us each day to remind us all of the new things coming our way.
frank aww but the past is never dead as long as we keep our memories of it alive but we must all move on. jimz lol you know even tho we at times some might think we don't listen truth is we do and it does show indeed. I have always compared CCP to a Rose from the first day I started reading her poetry here. My friend you are like a Dutchman's vine and slowly you are coming out of those shadows towards the light Awwww MsTeddy thank you very much Makes us wonder at times why is it that we miss things after we no longer have them and not enough when we do have them or is it we really never had it in the first place. |
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I wonder why is it that when someone makes a comment or more or less of a hint that maybe there is still something there why not just say what they really mean before it really is too late for sometimes it is not at that moment but if they do not speak up it will be and will always wonder later what if. After it is way to late. Humm just a thought that went through my mind this morning lol
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Very beautiful. It's almost like i have lived that life before.
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Kater I feel that I have lived it too many times myself and the journey goes on I wonder at times how many more timse will I have to make a stop on the way before I find one that really is on the same path of life that I'm they always seem to loose track and venture off the path before long lol
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i know what you mean..seems like i go the right direction but for some reason i end up on another path that leads to where I don't want to be.
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Ohhhh girl you are not on the wrong path. We all have our journey in life and the path we should be on it is finding the one that is on the same path as ours and that there path does not venture off. For there are ones out there that will stay on the same path the problem is finding that one. Sometimes we actally look too hard and try to keep them on our path we need to (I know I do for sure) not try to keep them on our path and just keep on going let them make the efford to stay on that path with us instead.
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So true hun
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