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Topic: Shhhhhh......Listen.
2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sat 03/22/14 10:26 PM
that was more than words that that was feeling beautiful felt that just a joy that xx Thank you for reading and commenting

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sun 03/23/14 04:28 AM
I'm with pkh, I can really feel this one. I like it, 2Kids. Sure enough it is deep. And pkh's truly on the mark here. Good on her! tommy boy moran / Sinn F�in Ireland ===

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sun 03/23/14 08:01 AM
I'm with pkh, I can really feel this one. I like it, 2Kids. Sure enough it is deep. And pkh's truly on the mark here. Good on her! tommy boy moran / Sinn F�in Ireland === Thank you Tommy..very much.

tamtam1980 Joined Sat 11/09/13 Posts: 1	Sun 03/23/14 09:18 AM
thats an awsome poem!!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sun 03/23/14 09:43 PM
thats an awsome poem!! ((Tamtam.))Thank you for reading;)))))

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 03/24/14 06:39 AM


2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Mon 03/24/14 12:32 PM
((((Tazz)))))

arcadefan Joined Thu 09/06/07 Posts: 17484	Wed 03/26/14 03:24 AM
very nice poem 2KidsMom

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 03/26/14 08:37 AM
very nice poem 2KidsMom (((((arcadefan))))Thank you for reading me.

NorCalSwe Joined Sun 03/09/14 Posts: 2438	Wed 03/26/14 09:31 AM
I could hear her silently, deliberating. Weighing the odds. Sometimes I think I hear her cry. Or maybe it's laughter..Yes! It's laughter, but I think it is a disguise. I see she is up late tonight, again. Love it when she wear's that evil clown grin. Despite the pain, I know she's in. I feel it coming..I can tell... Soon...very soon.. The Reaper and her, will be fighting again. I see her mother's heart. I see her friend's. Above, I see the Dragon is circling again. <333 What can I say 2K, except...wow...really fantastic but also

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 03/26/14 10:09 AM
I could hear her silently, deliberating. Weighing the odds. Sometimes I think I hear her cry. Or maybe it's laughter..Yes! It's laughter, but I think it is a disguise. I see she is up late tonight, again. Love it when she wear's that evil clown grin. Despite the pain, I know she's in. I feel it coming..I can tell... Soon...very soon.. The Reaper and her, will be fighting again. I see her mother's heart. I see her friend's. Above, I see the Dragon is circling again. <333 What can I say 2K, except...wow...really fantastic but also I truly know what you mean...((NorCalSwe)) Thank you very much for reading me.

Maria195 Joined Fri 10/04/13 Posts: 7361	Wed 03/26/14 04:36 PM
I love it (((2Kids )))

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 03/26/14 05:08 PM
I love it (((2Kids ))) Thank you ((((maria))))

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Wed 03/26/14 05:22 PM
I could hear her silently, deliberating. Weighing the odds. Sometimes I think I hear her cry. Or maybe it's laughter..Yes! It's laughter, but I think it is a disguise. I see she is up late tonight, again. Love it when she wear's that evil clown grin. Despite the pain, I know she's in. I feel it coming..I can tell... Soon...very soon.. The Reaper and her, will be fighting again. I see her mother's heart. I see her friend's. Above, I see the Dragon is circling again. <333

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 03/26/14 05:34 PM
I could hear her silently, deliberating. Weighing the odds. Sometimes I think I hear her cry. Or maybe it's laughter..Yes! It's laughter, but I think it is a disguise. I see she is up late tonight, again. Love it when she wear's that evil clown grin. Despite the pain, I know she's in. I feel it coming..I can tell... Soon...very soon.. The Reaper and her, will be fighting again. I see her mother's heart. I see her friend's. Above, I see the Dragon is circling again. <333 ((((Cathy))))) Thank you:-)))))

arcadefan Joined Thu 09/06/07 Posts: 17484	Mon 03/31/14 03:09 AM
your very welcome ((((2KidsMom)))))

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Wed 04/02/14 01:27 AM
2Kids, so very touching this, " Dragon Circling ". And here ye reach deep enough into my Soul, Babe. You're sure deep enough, Honey. My best, tomo / Ireland ===

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 04/02/14 05:40 AM
2Kids, so very touching this, " Dragon Circling ". And here ye reach deep enough into my Soul, Babe. You're sure deep enough, Honey. My best, tomo / Ireland === Thank you.(((((Tommy)))))

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 04/04/14 10:16 PM
I could hear her silently, deliberating. Weighing the odds. Sometimes I think I hear her cry. Or maybe it's laughter..Yes! It's laughter, but I think it is a disguise. I see she is up late tonight, again. Love it when she wear's that evil clown grin. Despite the pain, I know she's in. I feel it coming..I can tell... Soon...very soon.. The Reaper and her, will be fighting again. I see her mother's heart. I see her friend's. Above, I see the Dragon is circling again. <333 I really do love your work

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Mon 04/07/14 04:23 AM
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