Topic: The Dragon and the Maiden
karmafury's photo
Thu 09/13/07 09:17 AM
Found a Maiden, seemed cold of heart
Locked away behind her walls
Set herself away, set herself apart
Alone to roam her castle's halls

Came to be not far away
Watched her, wondered why the cold
I feared to speak, kept at bay
Waited for story to be told

Wondered what her tale would be
Wondered at her smile's beauty
Wondered if she'd speak with me
Wondered if she could be for me

Gate finally opened, she wandered out
We spoke of life and the hardship
Found why in her heart a drought
Formed together a bond, kinship

As we spoke I came to see
Dragon's heat the facade could heat
Melt away the mask we see
A Dragon's heart became complete

Now I long to leave this lair
Fly to her, show her a Dragon's care
Have wings envelope Maiden fair
Our time on earth together share

A Dragon searching for a friend
Sought nothing else you understand
Found something better in the end
Placed his heart in Maiden's hand

eileena9's photo
Thu 09/13/07 09:19 AM
Very nice Karmaflowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Thu 09/13/07 09:22 AM
That was beautifully written.I think CCP or whoever said you were a poet was completly right,really enjoy your poems.

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 09/13/07 09:26 AM
Awesome Karma as usually.bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 09/13/07 09:38 AM
Absoulutely Beautiful Karmafury... flowerforyou


LAMom's photo
Thu 09/13/07 10:24 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:
Beautiful

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Thu 09/13/07 11:13 AM
The poet has always lurked beneath your tough scaly hide Karma...so happy to see this side of the poet in you. Fantastic piece my brother!!flowerforyou

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Thu 09/13/07 12:55 PM
:heart: AS with YOUR first WORDS here, and WE saw a little of your HEART, then to NOW, You have been a man hidden behind your walls, and show US you WHEN it feels RIGHT to do.
Your AS "GOOD" with "WORDS" as you ARE with "PEOPLE"....
Long LIVE "YOU" and long live your "WORDS"...
MY "FRIEND" MY POET, "YOU" have "ARRIVED".....
Peace, and LOVE to ya MAN...:heart: drinker :wink: smokin

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 09/13/07 03:25 PM
Waaaayyyyyy awesome, Dragon man!

karmafury's photo
Thu 09/13/07 07:30 PM
Thank you all. Feels good to be writing again. Feels better to have a reason to write.

LAMom's photo
Thu 09/13/07 07:31 PM
Awwwwwwwwwww I am so happy for you (((( Karma )))))

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Rapunzel's photo
Fri 09/14/07 03:23 PM
How touching and very romantic...flowerforyou

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Fri 09/14/07 03:24 PM
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Gryphyn's photo
Fri 09/14/07 04:09 PM
:wink: smokin bigsmile