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Topic: Feel
ChelleBelle Joined Sun 07/15/07 Posts: 22893	Wed 09/12/07 02:52 PM
I know that you don't feel for me The way I feel for you. We're good friends, I value that, There's nothing you need do. But as a friend I need to tell you What is in my heart. An unsaid truth is like a wall, Keeping us apart. My love for you will go nowhere, Will just remain with me. I'll hold it in my quiet arms And feel it constantly.

defulk Joined Mon 07/16/07 Posts: 142	Wed 09/12/07 03:01 PM
Been there,done that

shutterguy Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 22516	Wed 09/12/07 03:03 PM
nice work

Hadeeya Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 138	Wed 09/12/07 03:05 PM
Very nice......but awwwwww, how sad

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 09/12/07 07:04 PM
Beautiful and so sad,,,

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 09/12/07 07:18 PM
good one

summerlady Joined Wed 03/07/07 Posts: 16232	Wed 09/12/07 08:13 PM
Very sweet!

HangedMan Joined Sun 05/13/07 Posts: 13640	Thu 09/13/07 09:40 PM
Very nice Chelle.....really liked it

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Thu 09/13/07 09:42 PM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 09/14/07 08:19 AM


karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Fri 09/14/07 08:21 AM
Very good. Been there.

lizardking19 Joined Wed 08/15/07 Posts: 1278	Fri 09/14/07 08:25 AM
thats very good (the poem not the topic, thats sad)

TwoTallOne Joined Thu 01/04/07 Posts: 16854	Fri 09/14/07 08:25 AM
Oh I think we have had the unrequianted ( is that a word ??.. lol ) feelings for someone ONCE in our lives ... good one .. :)

lizardking19 Joined Wed 08/15/07 Posts: 1278	Fri 09/14/07 08:49 AM
unrequitted*

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 09/14/07 08:53 AM
Nice poem with deep feelings of past hurts..GOOD THOUGHT

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Fri 09/14/07 08:55 AM
awesome poem chellebelle...i think everyone has felt this way at one time or another.

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