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Topic: Pure Love (Poem)
Poeticgirl Joined Wed 02/19/14 Posts: 4	Thu 02/20/14 06:08 PM
Love can only be pure when we hold the soul in an embrace, Is the morning thought and the missing illusion, the need of his words, the evening laughter... Love can only be pure when tears are promises, Passionate kisses with closed eyes, simplicity, It is trust wrapped like presents from heaven. To love is to smile from a whisper, To feel its burn within your sensibility, hopes, Stripping naked of your essence, fearless. Is the song inside your throat as you say goodnight, Love can only be pure with complete honesty, eternal friendship, To see the invisible and make love the spirit...

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 02/20/14 06:11 PM
Feels velvety...Soft ....Welcome to Mingle Poeticgirl!

Poeticgirl Joined Wed 02/19/14 Posts: 4	Thu 02/20/14 06:13 PM
Thank you! :)

sparkyae5 Joined Thu 03/28/13 Posts: 1595	Thu 02/20/14 07:23 PM
awsome

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 02/21/14 02:27 AM
Very nice, welcome

clintb74 Joined Thu 02/20/14 Posts: 303	Fri 02/21/14 05:25 AM
Love can only be pure when we hold the soul in an embrace, Is the morning thought and the missing illusion, the need of his words, the evening laughter... Love can only be pure when tears are promises, Passionate kisses with closed eyes, simplicity, It is trust wrapped like presents from heaven. To love is to smile from a whisper, To feel its burn within your sensibility, hopes, that is good, really good. Stripping naked of your essence, fearless. Is the song inside your throat as you say goodnight, Love can only be pure with complete honesty, eternal friendship, To see the invisible and make love the spirit...

Dazzzz72 Joined Fri 02/21/14 Posts: 3	Fri 02/21/14 06:10 AM
Beautifully Written PoeticGirl

prashant01 Joined Wed 05/06/09 Posts: 14148	Fri 02/21/14 06:18 AM
Love can only be pure when we hold the soul in an embrace, Is the morning thought and the missing illusion, the need of his words, the evening laughter... Love can only be pure when tears are promises, Passionate kisses with closed eyes, simplicity, It is trust wrapped like presents from heaven. To love is to smile from a whisper, To feel its burn within your sensibility, hopes, Stripping naked of your essence, fearless. Is the song inside your throat as you say goodnight, Love can only be pure with complete honesty, eternal friendship, To see the invisible and make love the spirit... Sorry to say,but it seems just a write up...not a poem! Welcome to mingle2!

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