Topic: “Sting of the Bee”
TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 09/11/07 12:36 PM
“Sting of the Bee”



I sat back and watch.
Knowing I was only a notch.
Each night I looked at your face.
You so boldly came to this place.
With your head held high.
You really thought you were so sly.
But you did not bargain for me.
That I would end up being like a bee.
How did it feel when you felt my sting?
Did you feel like you were in a boxing ring?
To your face did it bring a frown?
Did it hit you so hard it brought you down?
Did it take you to your knees?
And make you beg please.
You thought you were an expertise.
But instead you’re more like a disease.
It is ones like you.
And the things you do.
That makes it hard.
Then others must put up there guard.
But you see.
This time you got me.
You want to play.
Make my day.
Feel my sting.
I’m in full swing.
Do you feel it in your vein?
Are you in pain?
Oh it is too bad.
For now you have been had.



K.L.M
9/6/07



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Tue 09/11/07 12:44 PM
Delete? Why? It's a poem for heavens sake.grumble

Great poem Txs, lot of feeling and anger.flowerforyou

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Tue 09/11/07 12:48 PM
the best place to vent is thru written words .... well done .. :)

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 09/11/07 12:49 PM
flowerforyou Nice...

LAMom's photo
Tue 09/11/07 12:53 PM
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TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 09/11/07 01:09 PM
Awwwwww thanks all for reading.

Yes it is only a poem nothing else.

Mystique42's photo
Tue 09/11/07 01:43 PM
Nice to see you posting poems again TXS! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 09/11/07 04:12 PM
very well written feelings nice jobflowerforyou

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Tue 09/11/07 04:15 PM
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smokin RIGHT-ON!!!!!!!!!:heart: flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Tue 09/11/07 04:15 PM
Back in true form I see, glad to have you back. I think your more like a hornet, they hurt more and they sting more than once if they choose to.

:wink: flowerforyou drinker bigsmile

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TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 09/11/07 07:49 PM
mystique it is nice to be able to post them againbigsmile

pkh awww thanks girl

Terry lmao I see ya liked that one lol

Gryphyn my friend a hornet shssssssssssssh Heck lets just go with a bumble bee that way not only will they see me coming but know when they have been stung lmaolaugh laugh laugh laugh

nvrsaynvr's photo
Tue 09/11/07 07:54 PM
I think we all want to be the BEE, at least sometimes!!

Very nice!! flowerforyou drinker bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Tue 09/11/07 09:41 PM
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Hello me ((( Puddin Cup )))))))