Topic: Imagine Truth Is Hell
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Sat 02/01/14 07:56 AM
i think about you and the blood
that hemorrhaged

you were bleeding out and dying
and you told the paramedics
to make sure i was okay

there aren't many men like you were
"old dukers"

yeah, that's what you were

i spend my days wondering if
a noose would be quicker than a knife
if i could snap my neck
if i could find the right artery

you don't spend days
you've exhausted your credit limit

one day i will meet you
somewhere in hell
and you'll smile

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Sat 02/01/14 08:01 AM
good morning pancake man. Your writing seems to touch something always. well done. It is dreary here today and seeing some work of yours posted was a nice surprise. stay well my friend :)

oh, what makes you so sure that it will be in hell?flowerforyou

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Sat 02/01/14 08:18 AM
Happy sappy February PP.flowerforyou ..A nice, nice job on this one....:thumbsup: ...To HELL!drinker

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Sun 02/02/14 08:10 AM
good to read you.
admire your work.