i just want to have more views

LMAO! More views with no picture??

Put some pics up, besides that it looks fine

Capitalization, punctuation, correcting typo's and avoiding run-on sentences might help a bit but it is still understandable the way it is written, it just may not be a draw to some women. Do make sure to put up some nice pictures, several as a matter of fact. Welcome to Mingle2 and best wishes in finding the one for whom you are searching.

Capitalization, punctuation, correcting typo's and avoiding run-on sentences.......i dont think ppl should be so quick to judge based on that... if that would be the the case, im totaly screwed! If ur looking for mr.perfect" good luck on that______________
that be like: i dont like ya, bc you look like ur low class. im god bc im so perfect..if we where looking for perfect wtf is oboma pr�sident not 1 but 2 now...& what happen to america anyhow... its seems everything riged... u want to try to fix something... why
dont ppl work on getting there lifes back!

I think your profile looks good... at least ur honest & speak it how it is..

I wish my profile said Clearwater Florida..

Read the entirety of the comment and not just what you wish to pick on. I stated it might draw some other people if the corrections were made, not that it was not adequate as stated. I made specific reference to the fact that it was totally understable as stated. So take it as you will, my intent was well stated and if you cannot deal with that, look at your own insecurities about "being screwed". JMHO