Topic: Autumnal Jazz (romantic poem)
JRonin's photo
Thu 10/10/13 03:35 PM

My strange fruit

this obsession

my aural obsession

waits for me

at a place whose exterior

is brick and mortar

and whose interior

is warm sounds

of clarinet

and upright bass

full of the easy smiles

of scarved, jacketed ladies

who enjoy the comforts of brandy

and the cool demeanors of other

laid back cats who smell

of sweet cigs and distilled wine

as the smoke wafts thru the air

and the atmosphere

gets a positive buzz

a charge

of electrons

that sizzle

and swerve

as sounds melodic

and ethereal

and enchantingly organic

fill the space

and the crowd gazes to the stage

with rapt attention

The players play,

the ladies sway,

I look away,

transfixed and mesmerized

by the sweetest one in the room

your smile and sense of cool

permeating my heart and being with

so much innumerable possibility

for the night

or for the long haul, I ask myself.

Then you put your hand over mine, and

only the music are paid any mind

as we smile

and just become captivated

once again by the sound!

Oh the sound!

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Thu 10/10/13 04:08 PM
A delicious write that conjured up a very cool vibe and some great memories of amazing nights spent listening to blues and jazz played slow and low in the smoky back alley "cool cat" hangs of my younger dayssmitten ...I'm craving a cigarette, a bottle of gin, and a bucket of ice!!:wink: ...As always, love this and you!flowers

JRonin's photo
Thu 10/10/13 04:23 PM

A delicious write that conjured up a very cool vibe and some great memories of amazing nights spent listening to blues and jazz played slow and low in the smoky back alley "cool cat" hangs of my younger dayssmitten ...I'm craving a cigarette, a bottle of gin, and a bucket of ice!!:wink: ...As always, love this and you!flowers


I'll supply the drinks and the music. I don't smoke. Never have never will.
Thanks, Leigh. smooched drinker

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Thu 10/10/13 04:31 PM


A delicious write that conjured up a very cool vibe and some great memories of amazing nights spent listening to blues and jazz played slow and low in the smoky back alley "cool cat" hangs of my younger dayssmitten ...I'm craving a cigarette, a bottle of gin, and a bucket of ice!!:wink: ...As always, love this and you!flowers


I'll supply the drinks and the music. I don't smoke. Never have never will.
Thanks, Leigh. smooched drinker


You're welcomewaving ...Neither do I (smoke), your poem just made me wish I did!!laugh flowerforyou

JRonin's photo
Thu 10/10/13 04:46 PM



A delicious write that conjured up a very cool vibe and some great memories of amazing nights spent listening to blues and jazz played slow and low in the smoky back alley "cool cat" hangs of my younger dayssmitten ...I'm craving a cigarette, a bottle of gin, and a bucket of ice!!:wink: ...As always, love this and you!flowers


I'll supply the drinks and the music. I don't smoke. Never have never will.
Thanks, Leigh. smooched drinker


You're welcomewaving ...Neither do I (smoke), your poem just made me wish I did!!laugh flowerforyou


You are such a delight, milady! laugh

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Thu 10/10/13 04:50 PM
Well, that was lovely.

Nice write.drinker

JRonin's photo
Thu 10/10/13 04:55 PM

Well, that was lovely.

Nice write.drinker


Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! :smile:

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Thu 10/10/13 09:04 PM
Well said !
Thanks for sharing ...

drinks

JRonin's photo
Thu 10/10/13 09:35 PM

Well said !
Thanks for sharing ...

drinks


:smile:

pkh's photo
Thu 10/10/13 09:44 PM
Lovely as always

JRonin's photo
Thu 10/10/13 10:06 PM

Lovely as always


so are you my dear! flowers