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Water hits from showerhead,
in a sustained, warm cascade down my front and back skin lights up as I breathe in shallow breaths the depth of my mind's eye mired in steam and a shape behind the foggy glass partition that now opens to reveal that same shape, sultry and sensual as she slides the glass back joining me she is glorious her shape is perfection her lips purse wanting, needing to be kissed her body shivers when the water cascades down her back and front her hair matted and close, clinging to her supple, soft skin My ardor cannot be held in much longer as I lean forward and take her into my open arms she relaxes immediately, closes her eyes rests her head on my shoulder Her arms lock around my neck we stand there, enjoying the quiet the only sound is the water the only other element, the steam the only mood passing between us: contentment. The promise of her lips beckons again. Begging, almost. Her wishes shall be fulfilled. Her lusting heart, sated. An hour passes before the water turns off... and we are huddled on the floor, catching our breath, skin tingling, bodies cooling down replete and satisfied. Contentment achieved. She cannot find the words... I tell her it's okay, I know she wants to be held. She knows I want to hold her. So I do. Minutes pass. She is drowsy. I put her to bed, kiss her forehead. And lie beside her, watching her sleep. I hope her dreams are golden! 
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Steamy!! There for a minute I thought I was reading FIFTY SHADES OF GREY!
VERY NICE 
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Very nice, very hot lucky her
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There is no "her." well, not right now, anyway. Hoping to change that at some point. I've given up on finding her on Mingle2 though. still a nice place but not many people are on here from where I am, and even more are hard to tell apart from the fake profils or the deceptive ones or women who are a bit too old for me.
I just come here for the kicks, it seems. *sigh |
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Nice!!
 
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Morning Ronin
 ...I commented on this hawtness when you first posted it ...For some reason, it's even hawter now!! ...Love it and you!
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Morning Ronin ...I commented on this hawtness when you first posted it ...For some reason, it's even hawter now!! ...Love it and you!
 
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that definitely gets the imagination flowing .....
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that definitely gets the imagination flowing ..... which is what the intention was. ive written other poems too. |
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Water hits from showerhead, in a sustained, warm cascade down my front and back skin lights up as I breathe in shallow breaths the depth of my mind's eye mired in steam and a shape behind the foggy glass partition that now opens to reveal that same shape, sultry and sensual as she slides the glass back joining me she is glorious her shape is perfection her lips purse wanting, needing to be kissed her body shivers when the water cascades down her back and front her hair matted and close, clinging to her supple, soft skin My ardor cannot be held in much longer as I lean forward and take her into my open arms she relaxes immediately, closes her eyes rests her head on my shoulder Her arms lock around my neck we stand there, enjoying the quiet the only sound is the water the only other element, the steam the only mood passing between us: contentment. The promise of her lips beckons again. Begging, almost. Her wishes shall be fulfilled. Her lusting heart, sated. An hour passes before the water turns off... and we are huddled on the floor, catching our breath, skin tingling, bodies cooling down replete and satisfied. Contentment achieved. She cannot find the words... I tell her it's okay, I know she wants to be held. She knows I want to hold her. So I do. Minutes pass. She is drowsy. I put her to bed, kiss her forehead. And lie beside her, watching her sleep. I hope her dreams are golden!
Great!
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This was NC-17. There was mention of the words nipples, vagina, 4 play, cock. If you thought that was impure I'll keep my poems in my book.
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This was NC-17. There was mention of the words nipples, vagina, 4 play, cock. If you thought that was impure I'll keep my poems in my book. hence the term erotic. you don't like it you don't have to read it, but thanks for the critiques, I guess. Just a poem, no need to get all riled up. |
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Fri 10/18/13 07:33 AM
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Water hits from showerhead, in a sustained, warm cascade down my front and back skin lights up as I breathe in shallow breaths the depth of my mind's eye mired in steam and a shape behind the foggy glass partition that now opens to reveal that same shape, sultry and sensual as she slides the glass back joining me she is glorious her shape is perfection her lips purse wanting, needing to be kissed her body shivers when the water cascades down her back and front her hair matted and close, clinging to her supple, soft skin My ardor cannot be held in much longer as I lean forward and take her into my open arms she relaxes immediately, closes her eyes rests her head on my shoulder Her arms lock around my neck we stand there, enjoying the quiet the only sound is the water the only other element, the steam the only mood passing between us: contentment. The promise of her lips beckons again. Begging, almost. Her wishes shall be fulfilled. Her lusting heart, sated. An hour passes before the water turns off... and we are huddled on the floor, catching our breath, skin tingling, bodies cooling down replete and satisfied. Contentment achieved. She cannot find the words... I tell her it's okay, I know she wants to be held. She knows I want to hold her. So I do. Minutes pass. She is drowsy. I put her to bed, kiss her forehead. And lie beside her, watching her sleep. I hope her dreams are golden!
(((((JRonin))))I loved the poem!!!!!!  
Thought I would post again.
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Edited by
Conrad_73
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Fri 10/18/13 08:08 AM
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Water hits from showerhead, in a sustained, warm cascade down my front and back skin lights up as I breathe in shallow breaths the depth of my mind's eye mired in steam and a shape behind the foggy glass partition that now opens to reveal that same shape, sultry and sensual as she slides the glass back joining me she is glorious her shape is perfection her lips purse wanting, needing to be kissed her body shivers when the water cascades down her back and front her hair matted and close, clinging to her supple, soft skin My ardor cannot be held in much longer as I lean forward and take her into my open arms she relaxes immediately, closes her eyes rests her head on my shoulder Her arms lock around my neck we stand there, enjoying the quiet the only sound is the water the only other element, the steam the only mood passing between us: contentment. The promise of her lips beckons again. Begging, almost. Her wishes shall be fulfilled. Her lusting heart, sated. An hour passes before the water turns off... and we are huddled on the floor, catching our breath, skin tingling, bodies cooling down replete and satisfied. Contentment achieved. She cannot find the words... I tell her it's okay, I know she wants to be held. She knows I want to hold her. So I do. Minutes pass. She is drowsy. I put her to bed, kiss her forehead. And lie beside her, watching her sleep. I hope her dreams are golden!
I still say it is a great Poem,regardless !
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I have deleted several post from this thread. If your post was deleted it was cause it pertained to quoting those post that needed to be removed. Please next time REPORT PROBLEMS do not feed into them.
Poetry Forum does have specific guidelines of what kind of Poetry can be posted. As long as those guidelines have been met or not, then it is up to the site what poems will remain. At this time this poem will remain for it is not over the limit. What it does in fact is lets the mind see what it chooses to see... Site Mod Kristi |
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Great write.
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There is no "her." well, not right now, anyway. Hoping to change that at some point. I've given up on finding her on Mingle2 though. still a nice place but not many people are on here from where I am, and even more are hard to tell apart from the fake profils or the deceptive ones or women who are a bit too old for me. I just come here for the kicks, it seems. *sigh You've only been here a few months, give it time. And I'm sure new people join everyday, maybe someone close to where you are will still appear. |
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