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old poem
of my insanity old poem of an ancient soul are you always tragic for every time I write I fear for my love death in the mystical fire in the sudden rainbow in that rain from the flame I have to see to bleed out I have to see to hold in what's left and nothing else matters but it seems everything has to matter so I am blind now in my inspiration and the poem is struggling in the cement meadow as I drop pennies into the mouth of an angel and watch my prayer of words go unanswered like a riddle made up to fool god |
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(((( Jim ))))
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Respect.
I am snapping because that is beat brother. |
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Hey i like your poem
it sweet and touching too |
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Nice poem. I've read several of yours now, and it's very interesting to see how you lay them out.
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Jim very nice
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Awesome jimz as always you have such depth in your poems.
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