Topic: surrender
no photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:19 AM
standing here in the rain
trying to find the words to say
but how will you notice me
when you're always turned away
I can't make your dreams come true
but I can love you endlessly
if I could be of worth to you
would you then believe in me


I would surrender everything
from the depths of all I am
I would give my very breath
to someday be your man


If i could only hold you
I would always keep you safe
theres a side of me you never knew
I beg you not to push away
for it's all I have to give
just a love thats always true
Its the life I was made to live
but I was born for loving you


I would surrender every dream
can't you see it in my eyes
you're my neverending memory
and love is all I ask this time



yeah i know,it's sappy/its too full of happy sunny fuzzy lovey dovey
hippity hoppity happity romantic crap/i'm in love,crucify
me...............................................

BlackWidow8511's photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:31 AM
standing out in the rain
trying not to feel any pain
I would give anything to feel
my pain is just to real
Your gone now
how could I allow
to be hurt
you I held so long ago
now your just a foe
never will i repair inside
if only you would have tried

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:33 AM
Never I love watching every minute of it makes me realize there is still
love out there for all of us.

For when we quit dreaming we quit living.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 10/20/06 11:57 AM
JT
again,
now I am speechless...

BlackWidow8511's photo
Sat 10/21/06 10:08 PM
countrygirl why are you speechless?
its easy to understand!

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/22/06 03:24 AM
Hummmm, dont think it has anything to do
with understanding. But I think if someone
wrote those words to me I think it would
make me speechless also.

no photo
Sun 10/22/06 03:27 AM
nice poem jt, i love that feeling. it's just too bad it doesn't come
around more often.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 10/22/06 07:46 AM
Dreams come and go
just as the seasons flow
You cannot give up your dreams, just share them with me
winter summer, spring, and fall
These all change as the winds blow
red orange green and brown autumn is my favorite of all
neverending, circling with time
life comes from within
safety is knowing you are with me
whether or not you know
Here we go again...

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/22/06 08:33 AM
True King but when it does its a
beautiful thing to watch grow
with every passing day.