Topic: Unfair
mig25's photo
Wed 06/05/13 03:15 AM
Unfair

I need you
to stop
to not
love me like this
to not
touch me there
or leave me
with that aching kiss
so tired
of the confusion
it’s like
loving the reason
my soul is losing
the sleepless torture
of when
I toss
and turn
indulging in the heat
of your slow burn
I can’t explain
how it feels
so good
so damn good
comforting warmth
and spine tingling chills

Yet
that’s all are
as you leave
and leave me
as the remnants
of an unfair affair
alone
wondering
if you
or should I
even care
I just know
I don’t want
another night when I close my eyes
to wipe away
tomorrow tears
knowing it’s then
I have to live our love’s lies

pkh's photo
Wed 06/05/13 04:48 AM
Sad but great write

oldhippie1952's photo
Wed 06/05/13 05:18 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

1Cynderella's photo
Wed 06/05/13 06:38 AM
Edited by 1Cynderella on Wed 06/05/13 06:38 AM
Say the word and I'll take care of it. shades

What was the word again? frustrated


Seriously though...heartfelt write MIG! flowerforyou


no photo
Wed 06/05/13 06:39 AM
Heartfelt

Affectionisme's photo
Sat 06/08/13 07:24 AM
Beautifully written........sad.....and true. ..

bastet126's photo
Sat 06/08/13 03:41 PM
we go on so many journey's with you here mig, always a pleasure :)

Momoiro_Usagi_7's photo
Sat 06/08/13 03:46 PM
heartbreaking thank you for sharing this ...Beautiful!

no photo
Sat 06/08/13 03:48 PM
drinks

Good stuff Mig !

searchingsearching's photo
Sun 06/09/13 12:04 PM
still new here, but i like how people come here and share the common experiences of love an loss.
love your words, sad as they are
thanks for sharingflowerforyou

mig25's photo
Mon 06/10/13 03:07 AM

we go on so many journey's with you here mig, always a pleasure :)


Thanks bas . . . just feeding my addiction to the spoken word