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hello, please everyone
what do you guys think of my account? i will accept anyone's Critique ^_^ |
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Edited by
Momoiro_Usagi_7
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Mon 05/27/13 01:57 PM
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I think it's cool... The Anime part especially I love anime too!
Oh about the stubborn thing...you might wanna put feisty instead Of Stubborn sounds weird! *giggle* |
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thanks ^_^
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The first sentence of your blurb gives the impression that English isn't your first language. I'm not saying that that's necessarily a bad thing but it will make people suspect that you're scamming.
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you mean in this discussion or do you mean my account
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I mean the blurb on your profile where you talk about yourself.
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Hi,
Can any one look over my profile and give me some feed back? Thanks. 
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what should i change it to
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what should i change it to That depends on what it was that you meant to say. You used the definite article incorrectly there though. |
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i must say i am very impressed with your profile!! you sound like a terrific man. dont change a thing, in ur profile or in you! (well except maybe a relationship with Jesus!) hope you find your heats desire!
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i must say i am very impressed with your profile!! you sound like a terrific man. dont change a thing, in ur profile or in you! (well except maybe a relationship with Jesus!) hope you find your heats desire! i tried to send this to 'goodguy1030',,,,did you get it? |
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i meant to say was what was the blurb i made and what should i change to fix it.
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i meant to say was what was the blurb i made and what should i change to fix it.
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