Topic: The Last Time
mig25's photo
Mon 04/01/13 09:59 PM
The Last Time


Labored
weak
it was getting closer
and closer
to the last time
it would happen

Cough
raspy whisper
painful
bringing a tear
not sure if it’s because of the pain
or because of knowing
it is near and there is nothing I can do

Heaven help me
I’m not ready
not now
not yet
I want to hear laughter again
hear the rain
against the window
feel the sun
against my skin
the little things
the ones we take for granted



MisLopez's photo
Mon 04/01/13 10:11 PM
Beautiful......

Winlei's photo
Tue 04/02/13 12:42 AM
Sorry mig but it left me hanging. You know im in a situation like i was the one you are referring and it just end like that.... Cliffhanger mig.(whinning).
Nice it captures my soul but been sorry for the one who didnt ask forgiveness before life left them....*APPLAUSE*

mig25's photo
Wed 04/03/13 11:55 PM

Sorry mig but it left me hanging. You know im in a situation like i was the one you are referring and it just end like that.... Cliffhanger mig.(whinning).
Nice it captures my soul but been sorry for the one who didnt ask forgiveness before life left them....*APPLAUSE*


You know Winlei I really didn't want to end it with a cliffhanger but sometimes that's the only way.

mig25's photo
Wed 04/03/13 11:55 PM
Edited by mig25 on Wed 04/03/13 11:56 PM