Topic: Art words...
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Sun 03/31/13 03:58 AM
Art words
Serve a purpose
As they develop
Just
Under the surface
~
Some
Compel us
To expel them
Onto lines
Written
In rhymes
~
Meant
To touch
The mind’s eye
Bringing it alive
It makes us wise
~
To realize
To laugh
To love
To cry
To thrive
~
Others
Try
To decipher
Our artwords
~
But
~
A disconnect
Hides the text
They don’t give
So they don’t get
~
Heart to heart
Artwords
Spoken in verse
Can be heard
Only by those
In tuned
With
Our nature

think ©AthenaRose 03/31/13 think

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Sun 03/31/13 10:28 PM
Edited by DaySinner on Sun 03/31/13 10:37 PM
It's interesting how your writing unfolds. flowerforyou
It's wonderful when your meaning is truly heard. :heart:
Do you think that sometimes a hidden part of you takes over the writing, making connections you never expected?

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Mon 04/01/13 04:14 AM

It's interesting how your writing unfolds. flowerforyou
It's wonderful when your meaning is truly heard. :heart:
Do you think that sometimes a hidden part of you takes over the writing, making connections you never expected?


It's really cool when you know me so well that you can interpret my work with such ease... to me, that's what being one really means... :heart: :heart:

And yes, hidden parts of me do take over... as most of my creative writing is hidden even from me, until I put fingers to keys and my subconscious comes to life in my hands... The only time my writing is done with intentional forethought is when relating facts that require research or material evidence to sustain their point. think slaphead think