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Topic: ~ patterns
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Mon 03/18/13 11:27 AM
last night
i had too many dreams

love
forming,unforming

i'm looking at roots
when i ought to be looking at branches

i kept trying to comfort you
to cover you with a blanket

i'm looking at branches
when i ought to be looking at roots

unforming,forming
love

i had too many dreams
last night
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Mon 03/18/13 11:27 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Mon 03/18/13 05:34 PM
I still love how you capture so much in so few words...You got it goin on TB..
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Mon 03/18/13 05:50 PM
Always enjoy reading you Cyn...flowerforyou
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Mon 03/18/13 06:28 PM
I see sensitivity, caring, and desire for balance.
Beautiful and touching. flowerforyou
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Tue 03/19/13 05:59 AM
hippie......flowerforyou
Ainjel...& you are kind to keep reading! flowerforyou
Leigh...happy you find something to enjoy in my writing...smileflowerforyou
Daysinner...happy to see you reading & commentingflowerforyou
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Tue 03/19/13 06:41 AM
flowers flowers flowers
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Tue 03/19/13 07:25 AM
tazzops....flowerforyou
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Tue 03/19/13 05:07 PM

tazzops....flowerforyou
flowerforyou
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Tue 03/19/13 08:05 PM
Love is good
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Wed 03/20/13 01:19 PM
tazzops...:smile:

KIK2me...flowerforyou
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Thu 03/21/13 03:33 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Thu 03/21/13 04:11 PM
you, with these tightly woven little blankets of human warmth. intricate, yet subtle.

sophisticated elegance, artfully crafted.

<-----------------big fan!

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
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Thu 03/21/13 04:10 PM
..you,left these lovely words for me......they please me...big smile.
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Thu 03/21/13 04:13 PM
hmmmmm. another beauty
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Thu 03/21/13 04:15 PM
HeadnHeart.....flowerforyou thankyou.

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