Topic: Adrift | |
---|---|
Adrift
Azure, a perfect silence crystallized in tattletale eyes lulling distance with ease. Quiet relinquish familiar surround where void has chosen to reside. A home unable to welcome anything else. There were times everything...nothing was but a pretense, a charade to minimize the pounding of life. Vistas unfocused world...reality...unreachable landlocked. Her song lures. Cold this siren's soul the lying complacent of the deep, unbeknownst abyss. Tattle tale blue crying tears of silent truth ...yours alone. SadieLu ©2013 |
|
|
|
I am spiritually moved by particular lines in this poem. Powerful finish.
|
|
|
|
So lovely to read you again Sadie..I could relate to this piece..♥
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
I am spiritually moved by particular lines in this poem. Powerful finish. Thank you. I appreciate you sharing, reading. |
|
|
|
So lovely to read you again Sadie..I could relate to this piece..♥ Wonderful to see you, again. I cherish you. |
|
|
|
Thank you. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mornin..and I thank you. |
|
|
|
Thank you, Jeff...should I be wearin green? |
|
|
|
Thank you, Jeff...should I be wearin green? If you feel the spirit move you then yes by all means wear a little green. |
|
|
|
The beauty of your words communicates even the harshest realities with serenity and grace...Another beautiful piece, Sadie....
|
|
|
|
a lovely piece.
|
|
|
|
a lovely piece. You are lovely, thank you. |
|
|
|
ah ms. Sadie
always so nice to find you here... |
|
|
|
Very thought Provoking, nice write for sure....
|
|
|
|
The beauty of your words communicates even the harshest realities with serenity and grace...Another beautiful piece, Sadie.... Your thoughts encourage me, Thank you, Vicki. |
|
|
|
ah ms. Sadie always so nice to find you here... I am here when the signal permits...I try to keep up with you. I love what you are doing. |
|
|
|
Very thought Provoking, nice write for sure.... Thank you for your thoughts. This is a wonderful place to share. |
|
|