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oldhippie1952 · 2013-03-10T12:37:49-07:00

Desire The delicate touch Of your fingertips Traces across My feverish lips My hot trembling body Aches with so much pain I have a burning desire To feel you again Burning, aching, feverish Emotions of desire “I don’t want you” My body calls me a liar Kiss my lips Quench my thirst Free my emotions Before I burst

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oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 03/10/13 12:37 PM
Desire The delicate touch Of your fingertips Traces across My feverish lips My hot trembling body Aches with so much pain I have a burning desire To feel you again Burning, aching, feverish Emotions of desire “I don’t want you” My body calls me a liar Kiss my lips Quench my thirst Free my emotions Before I burst

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Sun 03/10/13 12:52 PM
love it hippie

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Sun 03/10/13 12:54 PM


oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 03/10/13 02:19 PM
Thanks guys.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 03/10/13 02:39 PM


DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Sun 03/10/13 02:49 PM
good write

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 03/10/13 03:01 PM
Desire The delicate touch Of your fingertips Traces across My feverish lips My hot trembling body Aches with so much pain I have a burning desire To feel you again Burning, aching, feverish Emotions of desire “I don’t want you” My body calls me a liar Kiss my lips Quench my thirst Free my emotions Before I burst Oooo Hippy, this is steamy ...Have you fallen in love?

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 03/10/13 04:25 PM
Thanks tazzops and daysinner. Leigh - nope.

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Sun 03/10/13 04:42 PM
Desire The delicate touch Of your fingertips Traces across My feverish lips My hot trembling body Aches with so much pain I have a burning desire To feel you again Burning, aching, feverish Emotions of desire “I don’t want you” My body calls me a liar Kiss my lips Quench my thirst Free my emotions Before I burst You wrote another poem. Good job!

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 03/10/13 05:02 PM
Thanks cutie.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 03/10/13 06:17 PM
'nice'

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Wed 03/27/13 04:27 AM
That was great!. Please write more. Areti

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Sun 04/14/13 04:22 AM
That was a great one hippie.....

1Cynderella Joined Mon 02/18/13 Posts: 2398	Sun 04/14/13 07:24 AM
Lovely write Hippy! Now where did I put my fan?

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 04/14/13 04:43 PM
Very nice.

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 04/14/13 05:02 PM
Thank you ladies. affectionisme all of my poems are in "Hippie's poetry:old/new/good/bad" thread

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 04/14/13 05:48 PM
oooooo

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 04/14/13 05:52 PM
Thank you sharris.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 04/14/13 05:55 PM
Thank you sharris. giggle..you're welcome.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Tue 04/16/13 11:29 AM
Nice write....

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