Topic: Is this really what love is made of?
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Sat 03/09/13 03:33 PM
I CAN’T DENY
My ANGER
My PAIN
My DOUBT
My REGRET
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It’s all locked inside my head
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And it’s eating me alive
It’s devouring my pride
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The happiness I felt
Only yesterday
Today I forget
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How is it possible to feel in an unpredictable way?
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Why can’t I say what I need to say?
DAM IT!
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Instead
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All I hear out of my own mouth
Is filled with the anger, the pain, and all of the doubt
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My feelings mixed with such explosive energy
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While the anger goads me to SHOUT, KICK or SCREAM
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The pain makes me want to just numb out
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But the doubt is tempting me to figure stuff out
And to even spell it all out
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I’ve never in all my days
Been so horribly mixed up
Feeling what I can’t touch
Dealing out such tough love
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Is all this agony really what love is made of?

©AthenaRose

03/09/13

d4tc's photo
Sat 03/09/13 04:50 PM
I CAN’T DENY
My ANGER
My PAIN
My DOUBT
My REGRET


I can't deny that i felt all of those emotions conveyed!

powerfuly written flowerforyou

badfish28's photo
Sat 03/09/13 05:32 PM
words of a broken heart, hang in there

kc0003's photo
Sat 03/09/13 05:36 PM
this, for me, is one your better pieces. flowerforyou

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Sat 03/09/13 10:33 PM

I CAN’T DENY
My ANGER
My PAIN
My DOUBT
My REGRET


I can't deny that i felt all of those emotions conveyed!

powerfuly written flowerforyou


thank you... flowerforyou

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Sat 03/09/13 10:33 PM

words of a broken heart, hang in there


thank you... flowerforyou

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Sat 03/09/13 10:35 PM

this, for me, is one your better pieces. flowerforyou


I agree.. and it's a shame that it had to come from raw emotion... flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 03/10/13 10:46 AM


this, for me, is one your better pieces. flowerforyou


I agree.. and it's a shame that it had to come from raw emotion... flowerforyou

I have to disagree...

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

~ Robert Frost


oldhippie1952's photo
Sun 03/10/13 11:00 AM
yes

woznotwoz's photo
Sun 03/10/13 11:04 AM
beautiful work full of sorrow and pain xxx hug for you from me :heart:

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Sun 03/10/13 12:40 PM



this, for me, is one your better pieces. flowerforyou


I agree.. and it's a shame that it had to come from raw emotion... flowerforyou

I have to disagree...

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

~ Robert Frost


flowerforyou

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Sun 03/10/13 12:41 PM

yes


:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 03/10/13 12:41 PM

beautiful work full of sorrow and pain xxx hug for you from me :heart:


thankx... flowerforyou

rynn1962's photo
Mon 03/11/13 10:28 AM
oh yes oh yes very nice ly put that is

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Mon 03/11/13 02:19 PM

oh yes oh yes very nice ly put that is


thanx rynn... flowerforyou