Topic: Is this really what love is made of? | |
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I CAN’T DENY
My ANGER My PAIN My DOUBT My REGRET --- It’s all locked inside my head --- And it’s eating me alive It’s devouring my pride --- The happiness I felt Only yesterday Today I forget --- How is it possible to feel in an unpredictable way? --- Why can’t I say what I need to say? DAM IT! --- Instead --- All I hear out of my own mouth Is filled with the anger, the pain, and all of the doubt --- My feelings mixed with such explosive energy --- While the anger goads me to SHOUT, KICK or SCREAM --- The pain makes me want to just numb out --- But the doubt is tempting me to figure stuff out And to even spell it all out --- I’ve never in all my days Been so horribly mixed up Feeling what I can’t touch Dealing out such tough love --- Is all this agony really what love is made of? ©AthenaRose 03/09/13 |
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I CAN’T DENY
My ANGER My PAIN My DOUBT My REGRET I can't deny that i felt all of those emotions conveyed! powerfuly written |
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words of a broken heart, hang in there
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this, for me, is one your better pieces.
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I CAN’T DENY My ANGER My PAIN My DOUBT My REGRET I can't deny that i felt all of those emotions conveyed! powerfuly written thank you... |
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words of a broken heart, hang in there thank you... |
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this, for me, is one your better pieces. I agree.. and it's a shame that it had to come from raw emotion... |
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this, for me, is one your better pieces. I agree.. and it's a shame that it had to come from raw emotion... I have to disagree... Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words. ~ Robert Frost |
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yes
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beautiful work full of sorrow and pain xxx hug for you from me
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this, for me, is one your better pieces. I agree.. and it's a shame that it had to come from raw emotion... I have to disagree... Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words. ~ Robert Frost |
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yes |
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beautiful work full of sorrow and pain xxx hug for you from me thankx... |
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oh yes oh yes very nice ly put that is
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oh yes oh yes very nice ly put that is thanx rynn... |
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