Topic: The Stupor
mig25's photo
Fri 03/08/13 01:58 AM
The Stupor


The stupor
that’s all this is
the needle is gone
but the elixir is still lingering
fading though
but for the moment
still here
and I can still feel
the stinging burn as I slowly push the needle’s concoction
deeper
and deeper
my eyes rolled back
dry mouth
shaking
needing
wanting
hating
this

I’ll ask for your help tomorrow


DaySinner's photo
Fri 03/08/13 02:13 AM
wow

mig25's photo
Fri 03/08/13 02:38 AM

wow


I'm hoping that's a good wow. I was trying to picture an addict going through the haze

DaySinner's photo
Fri 03/08/13 02:51 PM
Edited by DaySinner on Fri 03/08/13 02:56 PM
That's a good wow and I did get the picture. I could not say more at the time. The need to escape pain that takes over life is so very awful, ugly, and sad. A powerful write :thumbsup: