Topic: You still linger
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Mon 08/13/07 08:53 PM
Your soul still lingers by my side.
why will you not leave..........
I once loved you with everything that I am.
Now I just need you to go away....

I see you in the middle of the night
You take over my thoughts and dreams...
Please leave me alone.......
I need to move on...........

When you did what you did you carried me with you...
And part of your soul became attached to mine...
You became a permanent scar to my existence...
An eternal lesson.................

The woman that I knew has departed....No where to be found...
Yet she will not give me peace...Please go....
My own soul screams for forgiveness, for a reason...
What did I do to deserve this endless torture? Really What did I do?

I will say Good bye once again
in hopes that you will depart in the night...
There is only one favor I ask.....
Please take all the memories with you,
I can't stand to look back anymore.....




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Mon 08/13/07 08:59 PM
Mike -- This is very nicely written. And I can totally identify with the sentiment. We really do need to learn from that "eternal lesson."


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Mon 08/13/07 09:00 PM
Mike, we can all relate to that feeling...thanks for sharing another great poem!smooched

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Mon 08/13/07 10:18 PM
Mike I have come to really enjoy your writing,, flowerforyou
Written with so much passion, love and pain

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Mon 08/13/07 11:01 PM
wow ,,thats awesome ! great writing.....flowerforyou

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Mon 08/13/07 11:27 PM
Thank you Mike,

"i like that"

bigsmile

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Mon 08/13/07 11:35 PM
Breathe bro, it goes away in due time. Keep writing!!!

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Tue 08/14/07 01:42 AM
flowerforyou (((((((Mike))))))))
Spoken from the heart & soul!
The worse part is the self torture!!!
:heart:

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Tue 08/14/07 06:28 AM
Very Niceflowerforyou

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Tue 08/14/07 08:38 AM
Thanks for the comments......Almost didn't post this one

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Tue 08/14/07 10:06 AM
nice wording, the problems with the memories are, they're the source of living too, regardless thier ststusflowerforyou

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Tue 08/14/07 10:26 AM
You have truly captured in words that tangled feeling that can
be with us from the past.
But you can be free due to your willingness to move on towards a future.
Excellent emotional perception....
Bravo!!!
GEL