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Your soul still lingers by my side.
why will you not leave.......... I once loved you with everything that I am. Now I just need you to go away.... I see you in the middle of the night You take over my thoughts and dreams... Please leave me alone....... I need to move on........... When you did what you did you carried me with you... And part of your soul became attached to mine... You became a permanent scar to my existence... An eternal lesson................. The woman that I knew has departed....No where to be found... Yet she will not give me peace...Please go.... My own soul screams for forgiveness, for a reason... What did I do to deserve this endless torture? Really What did I do? I will say Good bye once again in hopes that you will depart in the night... There is only one favor I ask..... Please take all the memories with you, I can't stand to look back anymore..... |
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Mike -- This is very nicely written. And I can totally identify with the sentiment. We really do need to learn from that "eternal lesson."
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Mike, we can all relate to that feeling...thanks for sharing another great poem!
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Mike I have come to really enjoy your writing,,
Written with so much passion, love and pain |
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wow ,,thats awesome ! great writing.....
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Thank you Mike,
"i like that" |
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Breathe bro, it goes away in due time. Keep writing!!!
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(((((((Mike))))))))
Spoken from the heart & soul! The worse part is the self torture!!! |
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Very Nice
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Thanks for the comments......Almost didn't post this one
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nice wording, the problems with the memories are, they're the source of living too, regardless thier ststus
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You have truly captured in words that tangled feeling that can
be with us from the past. But you can be free due to your willingness to move on towards a future. Excellent emotional perception.... Bravo!!! GEL |
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