Topic: The Chance
Givemyheart2U's photo
Tue 02/19/13 01:24 PM
You think you see me
you see me smile
and you see me laugh
You see me happy
but never sad
you see my accomplishments
but never my failures
I claim to be perfect sometimes
but I am far from it
Sometimes I need help
but I never ask for it
When people are hurting
I understand and feel their pain too
more than I should
but I have more of heart
than I know what to do with
I have all the time I need
but it's never enough for just me
I have many friends
but the best ones
have always come and gone
You don't see my invisible tears
that are rather visible
that carry the emotional
pieces of my life
that I hate the world to see
but few people would ever take that chance
Would you?

GMH2U

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Tue 02/19/13 02:39 PM
yes... :heart: flowers

Teditis's photo
Tue 02/19/13 03:18 PM
That's an awesome write... er, even more than that.
It seems too true of most of us. (Many of us? Some of us? idk.)

As for for me... no, I would not intrude on another's life.
Unless they expressly, gave me permission to.

Very hard hitting. Well done!flowerforyou