Topic: My Confession
h3llokitti3's photo
Sat 02/02/13 06:43 AM
The throne of thorns is coming
spun of sun and silk
castrating Neptune's bones
from breeding blood and filth

All my forgotten names
ancient serpents in my soul
perforated prophecies
an abortion lost in utero

Invoking all your saints
a poetic malady
blinded by the Fate's
and their myopic prophecy

A centaur's snare of chaos
the Iliad engulfing me
drunk on the blood of Mars
now war is all I see

Launching my confession
a full frontal assault
of grandiose repentance
freeing me from fault

Suffering in soulful screams
Reality a lucid dream

Clawing at my jaw
this labyrinth of lies
hunting down the minotaur
a dragon in disguise

Lathered in her web
Medusa's bearing down
in paralytic stone
my tongue comes unwound

Milking the womb of madness
a masochistic reverie
my soul committed suicide
now my mind is haunting me

*I should have probably included this warning after my first submission, but my poetry is a raw reflection of stereotypes and hypocrisy, with a prevalent religious undertone. It's angry and paradoxical, I hope no one's offended.*

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Sat 02/02/13 07:00 AM
Awesome write in a angry paradoxical way....:tongue: laugh flowerforyou smokin

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Sat 02/02/13 07:01 AM

The throne of thorns is coming
spun of sun and silk
castrating Neptune's bones
from breeding blood and filth

All my forgotten names
ancient serpents in my soul
perforated prophecies
an abortion lost in utero

Invoking all your saints
a poetic malady
blinded by the Fate's
and their myopic prophecy

A centaur's snare of chaos
the Iliad engulfing me
drunk on the blood of Mars
now war is all I see

Launching my confession
a full frontal assault
of grandiose repentance
freeing me from fault

Suffering in soulful screams
Reality a lucid dream

Clawing at my jaw
this labyrinth of lies
hunting down the minotaur
a dragon in disguise

Lathered in her web
Medusa's bearing down
in paralytic stone
my tongue comes unwound

Milking the womb of madness
a masochistic reverie
my soul committed suicide
now my mind is haunting me

*I should have probably included this warning after my first submission, but my poetry is a raw reflection of stereotypes and hypocrisy, with a prevalent religious undertone. It's angry and paradoxical, I hope no one's offended.*


Your writing "speaks" volumes...It is very good!....It does not need to be qualified...Actually, I find it refreshing!...

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Sat 02/02/13 07:03 AM
lol I wish I could write some tearjerkingly beautiful love poem laugh
never seems to work out though :tongue:
thanks for the read flowerforyou

h3llokitti3's photo
Sat 02/02/13 07:04 AM
Thanks Leigh, that's very sweet and much appreciated. I know my writings an acquired taste! laugh

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Sat 02/02/13 07:07 AM

lol I wish I could write some tearjerkingly beautiful love poem laugh
never seems to work out though :tongue:
thanks for the read flowerforyou


You're great!! and believe when I tell you, we have enough tear jerking love poems here to fill a Nashville library!laugh

for you, flowers Cheeky kiss and posies....

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Sat 02/02/13 07:08 AM
hello h3llo! i love it, has depth and texture and i, for one, just didn't want it to end! welcome! :)

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Sat 02/02/13 07:18 AM

lol I wish I could write some tearjerkingly beautiful love poem laugh
never seems to work out though :tongue:
thanks for the read flowerforyou
Thanks for sharing the awesome angry paradoxical poetry.laugh smokin flowerforyou
It's like mental coffee....drinker

h3llokitti3's photo
Sat 02/02/13 11:03 AM
lol, but I love the tearjerkers! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it flowerforyou :heart:

h3llokitti3's photo
Sat 02/02/13 11:04 AM
That's quite the compliment up2us, any coffee is good coffee in my world! laugh