Topic: Alice In Flames
RainbowTrout's photo
Wed 01/30/13 05:05 PM
Escaping from Wonderland seemed so easy.
For once, reality more desirable than fantasy.
But it was more of the mad hatter in disguise.
Finding him outself his realm was a surprise.

I didn't realize we spent much time together.
As hard as I try I just can't seem to forget her.
That smile; Those lips; The softness was mine.
I try to remember the joy with each new line.

Now am caught in the betwixt and between.
If only for a moment a juxtaposition of green.
Blue and yellow mixed; Sadness and coward.
Trudging the road to destiny must go forward.

Now just want to throw the book into that fire.
But I really can't blame Alice for all this desire.
The chameleon can't blink like that old Cheshire.
Don't really know how I got into this new mire.

It used to be so easy just to run far, far away.
But I am digging myself out of the pit today.
Alice do you want to come on this new trip?
Or will you wait to sister awakens and skip?

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Wed 01/30/13 05:28 PM

Escaping from Wonderland seemed so easy.
For once, reality more desirable than fantasy.
But it was more of the mad hatter in disguise.
Finding him outself his realm was a surprise.

I didn't realize we spent much time together.
As hard as I try I just can't seem to forget her.
That smile; Those lips; The softness was mine.
I try to remember the joy with each new line.

Now am caught in the betwixt and between.
If only for a moment a juxtaposition of green.
Blue and yellow mixed; Sadness and coward.
Trudging the road to destiny must go forward.

Now just want to throw the book into that fire.
But I really can't blame Alice for all this desire.
The chameleon can't blink like that old Cheshire.
Don't really know how I got into this new mire.

It used to be so easy just to run far, far away.
But I am digging myself out of the pit today.
Alice do you want to come on this new trip?
Or will you wait to sister awakens and skip?



I LOVE the complexity..This is one smart write!flowerforyou :banana: flowerforyou

RainbowTrout's photo
Wed 01/30/13 06:22 PM
Thank you. I haven't wrote in a while.:smile:

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Wed 01/30/13 08:36 PM
Excellent write....smokin drinker

Teditis's photo
Wed 01/30/13 08:41 PM
Just don't drink the potion... er, make sure that you do.
Something...?

pennyg281's photo
Wed 01/30/13 09:05 PM
Wonderful write :) Welcome Back :) Ive missed your wonderland writes . . .Hope all is well with you my friend.

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Thu 01/31/13 12:26 AM

Escaping from Wonderland seemed so easy.
For once, reality more desirable than fantasy.
But it was more of the mad hatter in disguise.
Finding him outself his realm was a surprise.

I didn't realize we spent much time together.
As hard as I try I just can't seem to forget her.
That smile; Those lips; The softness was mine.
I try to remember the joy with each new line.

Now am caught in the betwixt and between.
If only for a moment a juxtaposition of green.
Blue and yellow mixed; Sadness and coward.
Trudging the road to destiny must go forward.

Now just want to throw the book into that fire.
But I really can't blame Alice for all this desire.
The chameleon can't blink like that old Cheshire.
Don't really know how I got into this new mire.

It used to be so easy just to run far, far away.
But I am digging myself out of the pit today.
Alice do you want to come on this new trip?
Or will you wait to sister awakens and skip?



this is going to be a journey worth watching I'm sure of it... nice to meet you, rainbowtrout.. or should I say.. mad hatter.. :) cool nic too.. I feel the sadness and other emotions in this, but also see the new awakening too... nice write... can't wait to read more... flowerforyou