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What re you doing in me? I invited you to keep me company as a friend,but you took me to your dizzy world. What a false impression you giving me! Asking me to jump 3metres while i could barely jump 1.5metres. Asking me to fight a loin while i could barely stand a grass cutter. Standing before a miror talking to myself, i saw alcohol talking to alcohol. You ve created a new world for me. I would ve loved your spinning world cos of the confidence it gives,but i hate it cos it fakes my world.
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I don't touch the stuff myself... had one too many spinning incidents myself when I was younger... lol... good write, Solace... good lesson too, huh?
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Yup! Tnx for readin,ok?
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Now that's one of the best pieces of writing I've seen in a long while,
short, honest, heart felt, straight to the point, and not full of pretentiousness. |
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Now that's one of the best pieces of writing I've seen in a long while, short, honest, heart felt, straight to the point, and not full of pretentiousness. I agree! Nice one Solace! |
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good ol' alcohol. I keep telling it to get lost, it keeps pounding on my window...
good write |
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Thanks so very much!
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Thank you all for your coments!
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oh jees
I would like a kind arm around me for such a crime. I do want to quit the alcohol but would like a hand |
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how real is that? thanks solace :)
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Dead real! You welcm!
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What re you doing in me? I invited you to keep me company as a friend,but you took me to your dizzy world. What a false impression you giving me! Asking me to jump 3metres while i could barely jump 1.5metres. Asking me to fight a loin while i could barely stand a grass cutter. Standing before a miror talking to myself, i saw alcohol talking to alcohol. You ve created a new world for me. I would ve loved your spinning world cos of the confidence it gives,but i hate it cos it fakes my world. |
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Addiction is an enemy with many faces. Once you put a face on the enemy it can be defeated. There is no enemy that will go down without a fight however.
Good luck my friend! Good write |
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Tnx mr soul!
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