Topic: Alcohol!
Solace84's photo
Mon 01/28/13 02:07 PM
What re you doing in me? I invited you to keep me company as a friend,but you took me to your dizzy world. What a false impression you giving me! Asking me to jump 3metres while i could barely jump 1.5metres. Asking me to fight a loin while i could barely stand a grass cutter. Standing before a miror talking to myself, i saw alcohol talking to alcohol. You ve created a new world for me. I would ve loved your spinning world cos of the confidence it gives,but i hate it cos it fakes my world.

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Mon 01/28/13 02:19 PM
I don't touch the stuff myself... had one too many spinning incidents myself when I was younger... lol... good write, Solace... good lesson too, huh?

Solace84's photo
Mon 01/28/13 02:38 PM
Yup! Tnx for readin,ok?

motowndowntown's photo
Mon 01/28/13 04:14 PM
Now that's one of the best pieces of writing I've seen in a long while,
short, honest, heart felt, straight to the point, and not full of
pretentiousness.

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Mon 01/28/13 05:07 PM

Now that's one of the best pieces of writing I've seen in a long while,
short, honest, heart felt, straight to the point, and not full of
pretentiousness.


:thumbsup: I agree! Nice one Solace!flowerforyou

goldenhinde's photo
Mon 01/28/13 05:11 PM
good ol' alcohol. I keep telling it to get lost, it keeps pounding on my window...
good write

Solace84's photo
Mon 01/28/13 10:30 PM
Thanks so very much!

Solace84's photo
Mon 01/28/13 10:34 PM
Thank you all for your coments!

goldenhinde's photo
Mon 01/28/13 10:36 PM
oh jees
I would like a kind arm around me for such a crime. I do want to quit the alcohol but would like a hand

bastet126's photo
Tue 01/29/13 05:57 PM
how real is that? thanks solace :)

Solace84's photo
Wed 01/30/13 07:56 AM
Dead real! You welcm!

Conrad_73's photo
Wed 01/30/13 08:45 AM

What re you doing in me? I invited you to keep me company as a friend,but you took me to your dizzy world. What a false impression you giving me! Asking me to jump 3metres while i could barely jump 1.5metres. Asking me to fight a loin while i could barely stand a grass cutter. Standing before a miror talking to myself, i saw alcohol talking to alcohol. You ve created a new world for me. I would ve loved your spinning world cos of the confidence it gives,but i hate it cos it fakes my world.
yes,right on the mark!:thumbsup:

Sojourning_Soul's photo
Wed 01/30/13 08:48 AM
Addiction is an enemy with many faces. Once you put a face on the enemy it can be defeated. There is no enemy that will go down without a fight however.

Good luck my friend! Good write drinker

Solace84's photo
Wed 01/30/13 11:48 AM
Tnx mr soul!