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I do not write to ease my pain I do not write to clear your name.
I only write to keep me sane and in the dark forget your name. Don't think of me don't say my name since in sadness I will stay. I tried my best I gave my all and in the end you crushed it all. I just hope one day soon my true queen will erase it all. |
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YOU need to erase it all before your true Queen steps forward, rather then rely on someone else to do it for you...Doesn't work and wont work...But nice write anyway...
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Thank you but only wrote it since it sounded good in my head. Depression kicks its head in my head sometimes so I try to get creative when its around.
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Edited by
Ainjel
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Mon 01/28/13 12:48 AM
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Lots of creativity comes from depression, if you let it..Good for you mate..
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I do not write to ease my pain I do not write to clear your name. I only write to keep me sane and in the dark forget your name. Don't think of me don't say my name since in sadness I will stay. I tried my best I gave my all and in the end you crushed it all. I just hope one day soon my true queen will erase it all. I hope you don't stay unhappy for too long, Normal.. Sad feelings can produce good poetry, but happy ones can too... thanks for sharing... 
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Thank you.
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Lots of creativity comes from depression, if you let it..Good for you mate.. Ok now I'm hoping I'm not depressed since I'm feeling creative right now. But I do like this write. |
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Ur prob fine. I choose to get creative when I start feeling blue. You can be creative whenever. Just let it flow out. Its in you so all you have to do is let it be free. And thank you for reading. I'm glad u liked it.
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I do not write to ease my pain I do not write to clear your name. I only write to keep me sane and in the dark forget your name. Don't think of me don't say my name since in sadness I will stay. I tried my best I gave my all and in the end you crushed it all. I just hope one day soon my true queen will erase it all. I like how you end bravado by showing a desire to love again...Nicely done! 
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Why thank you. You gotta keep having faith. You'll see that in pretty much all my writings. Spoiler lol. Again thanks for reading.
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That is a nice write!!
I liked it and hope to see more. 
I do hope that nothing erases anyone from your memory... but those are my own thoughts. Yours flowed freely... Bravo! |
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That is a nice write!! I liked it and hope to see more.
I do hope that nothing erases anyone from your memory... but those are my own thoughts. Yours flowed freely... Bravo! Thank you and you will. The past is what helps make us in the moment. |
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Memories are the tools that mold us.
It is never good to erase what defines ones journey or it will become a round trip. For the determination to not give up I commend you, but we must face our past or we are doomed to repeat it. I enjoyed your piece, and hope your writing brings the clarity you seek.
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Writing is one way of many I choose to give my footsteps and understand how planted they are.
Without my writes i am not last but clearly see better across the horizon |
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