You’ve had my attention from the start
I wasn’t thinking with my head
I was feeling my way through
with my heart
finally
this is something I want to feel
and I want to pretend it’s real
I’m not ashamed to admit
I like the fantasy
the make believe
the you and me
we’ll never be
except for in my dreams
because sometimes
fake is much more safe
than real
it can be more real
than how real
can ever feel
and if it’s a crime to take something fake
and pass it off as real
then I’ll consider you a steal
and if convicted of taking what I want
from you
I won’t even bother to appeal
instead
I’ll gladly serve a life sentence
with the way you make me feel
I hope I’m not spinning my wheels
explaining my philosophy
telling you
what works for me
after all
we’re not children playing
hide and seek
we’re lovers
crushing on the rush
buzzing on our freak
geek to geek!
So
NO
we won’t cry
our love wasn’t a lie
it just wasn’t real
you get the deal
right?

AR©01/26/13

Good! Don't Cry :p

Yea,atimes fake does appear much more like real. Every word in English language seems to obey you. I mean you 've got a good comand of English language. The deal is clear,ma'am! Exellent write!

hi Kennee, welcome to the writers forum... I appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. I bet you don't cry either...

thank you, Solace... for the compliment... and for reading my work...

here's a life lesson I learned along the way... when a man says he loves me and never shows me, the love isn't real, it's just empty words, being used as a means to an end... "Actions speak louder than words" is an old cliche that will be timeless... because it's true... when a man really loves a woman, he shows her everyday, and she knows when it's the real thing...

hi oldhippie... glad you stopped by...

Yea,men could be tricky atimes in this game called love,you know.

yes... men think they are magicians at times... but when a woman has seen the same magic show before.. she wants her money for the ticket refunded... so she can move on to love, not magic that can disappear just as quickly as it appeared before her eyes...

hi zim... aaawww, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make you cry... dry your eyes... hold on to them until real love comes into play... then we'll
see if it's a crying game...

Hehehe My De-ar the Tears will Roll when they're Commanded 2 by the Uncontrollables :p

you've quite the wit, and confidence, Kennee.. but whose tears might they be? now I'm intrigued... uncontrollables that can command tears, like sending an army into battle... yes.. intrigued indeed..