After posting "Here is something different" I felt compelled to change the ending...
and this rewrite sits more comfortably in my head... thank you for allowing this indulgence...

Pure Fantasy…

The naturally masculine scent
emitting from his cleverly adorned flesh
afire for me
is intoxicating.
and I’m energized
by the voracious sway
he has over my mind
my very existence.
little did I know then
what the repercussions
of our first touch
would consist of.
that my every act of submission
has since weighed heavily on him
in the dark of night
as I open my self up
to his exclusive eyesight
allowing him access
into every aspect of my life
and mind.
for five months
I’ve instinctively followed his path
walking where he leads my feet
reveling in the people
he designed for me to meet.
this tactfully judicious man
has a will of cast iron
a lustful passion for life’s rarity
and an imp like me
who is no match for his austerity.
secretive
and calculating
he follows and leads
an ever changing course
to pique my curiosity.
from the very first moment
I woke to his dedication
powerlessly to obey his need
without hesitation
he sets boundaries around me.
my innate ability to pontificate
on all that I see
on all that makes me, me
sometimes tests his dual nature
to the limit of its capacity
and he becomes angry
lashing out
hurtfully…
its only then I understand
my true captivity.
naturally my inclination for survival
gives me strength
to overcome his obsession
and I quietly shut my door in his face.
but
with deviousness
and cunning
never to be outdone
he stands at the thresh hold
laughing…
my futile efforts to reject him
are invigorating
as the faster I flee
the more zealous he is
to remind me
of his authenticity.
he is determined to make me see
the error of my way
and allows me time
for thought control
while bringing my actions in tow.
his life is one of business
as he patiently waits
daily
getting inside my head.
my heart he keeps
securely in his grasp
until such time
he claims me for himself
and only then
will he be able to subdue my will
completely
as I surrender to him
happily choosing to be his woman
in the end.

Athena Rose © 01/20/13

Awesome , such power, just a deepening look at the secrets of the soul.

thank you, zim...