Topic: Simple Words are spoken.....
threepurpleroses's photo
Sat 01/19/13 04:48 PM
Simple words are spoken,
Softly as the dew
In the morning air,
Fresh, crisp, and clean.

They speak of love,
Blowing in the gentle breeze,
Not hindered by the sands of time,
Which has no meaning for them.

As these words are spoken,
They are received with murmured feelings.
Feelings so strong, wild, and free,
Received heartily by a heart so true.

Given without reason or rhyme,
Each word is clung to,
Remembered and valued,
As a heart’s true meaning.

Actions so clearly defined,
As to the words they describe.
The heartfelt dreams of a young love,
But, one that will be forever in time.

Melissa R. Thompson 1-19-2013

ashryn's photo
Sat 01/19/13 05:43 PM
love this :D

threepurpleroses's photo
Sat 01/19/13 06:48 PM
flowerforyou Thank You!flowerforyou

Zimzane2's photo
Sat 01/19/13 07:03 PM
Thank you

threepurpleroses's photo
Sat 01/19/13 09:21 PM
flowerforyou You are very welcomeflowerforyou

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Sun 01/20/13 12:14 AM

Simple words are spoken,
Softly as the dew
In the morning air,
Fresh, crisp, and clean.

They speak of love,
Blowing in the gentle breeze,
Not hindered by the sands of time,
Which has no meaning for them.

As these words are spoken,
They are received with murmured feelings.
Feelings so strong, wild, and free,
Received heartily by a heart so true.

Given without reason or rhyme,
Each word is clung to,
Remembered and valued,
As a heart’s true meaning.

Actions so clearly defined,
As to the words they describe.
The heartfelt dreams of a young love,
But, one that will be forever in time.

Melissa R. Thompson 1-19-2013



Forever love... WoW! When I got to that last stanza my nerves began to react, tingling at the feel of the unity and clarity of the love between these two souls...

excellent write, roses, the tenderness expressed is overpowering... good for you... to have this kind of talent... flowerforyouflowerforyouflowerforyou

threepurpleroses's photo
Sun 01/20/13 01:53 AM
flowerforyou Thank youflowerforyou