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you're trying too hard
out in the back yard tallying scars to the length of your arm and i want to be smiling the chandelier is crashing down again it's the crystal eight ball with designer trim you sold your self-defense i could have been a better actor for you everyone knows i never skipped my lines but i've been cut isn't that cute? there are some sins we can't define some sins we can’t take back not that either of us would we are married to this our nomadic religion driving, driving, driving seems like we’re always driving she keeps twisting up her hair unsettled daydreams filtered by the tinted windows i'm not sure why i even care guess it's just something to spend my time in i'm not one to play the course i'm out of luck ceremonial clink primordial unveiling skin stretches you out thin as your regrets but i've got cigarettes and you’ve got the paper umbrella from your last drink i just keep racing back and forth always driving my heart twitches chain-link fence in winter that familiar sign-post i can't wait until i'm lost again |
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very evocative! Thank you
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you sold your self-defense there are some sins we can't define some sins we can’t take back not that either of us would we are married to this our nomadic religion driving, driving, driving seems like we’re always driving i'm not sure why i even care i'm not one to play the course i'm out of luck skin stretches you out thin as your regrets but i've got cigarettes and you’ve got the paper umbrella from your last drink i just keep racing back and forth always driving i can't wait until i'm lost again GW, I love the way you describe this independent journey... controlling our own lives, love who we will, make our mistakes... keep moving forward... cope the way we want too.. and there's nothing better than being found again after we've gotten lost for the umpteenth time... makes it all worth the cost... Thanks for sharing... |
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Thank you. Very creative and enjoyable.
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"unsettled daydreams filtered by the tinted windows" "I can't wait until I'm lost again".....Wow!
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perfection
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So much talent. I can't write poetry, only read it.
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