Topic: Part Of The Disease
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Mon 01/07/13 04:07 AM
Edited by shapirobo on Mon 01/07/13 04:14 AM
I stare at the naked world
This big rotting wound
everywhere I look I see disease
Infected communities
Greed, many mean men
selfishness, no one cares
everyone’s busy with their own dreams
starving kids, a sick rot society
rumours of judgement
humanity’s sorry excuse for their cowardice
babel that everybody will one day pay
In what world Dreamers?
Everybody is so interested in matters of death
too deep in the confusion of its mysterious magic
life goes by like a short weak breeze
terrorist's experiments of suicide being key
A paranoid few who love comic book fiction
a little bit too much I think
Stories of a god who walked among men
then there are the freaks who don't understand
beef is just beef
this rotten wound, filth, filth ,FILTH
I’m sorry if I hurt you
I wish I could say, apologize
But why Give in if you don't have to
Even surrender is taken not given
Sadly away from the view of my window
I stare at the reflection of my naked self;
sick filth; I am no better
As much as I wish I could care I don’t
I walk through my life kicking
everything and everyone in my way
until I get to reach my dream
I fight for the top most seat I can reach
I am not ashamed of looking at myself
I am satisfied with whom I am

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Mon 01/07/13 04:39 AM
Really nice enjoyed it and your work is inspiring and will inspire a lot of people to quit trying to be like others and be themselves.....................hope to read more of your work soon good luck and happy new year

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Mon 01/07/13 04:44 AM

I’m sorry if I hurt you
I wish I could say, apologize
But why Give in if you don't have to
Even surrender is taken not given
Sadly away from the view of my window
I stare at the reflection of my naked self;
sick filth; I am no better
As much as I wish I could care I don’t
I walk through my life kicking
everything and everyone in my way
until I get to reach my dream
I fight for the top most seat I can reach
I am not ashamed of looking at myself
I am satisfied with whom I am


I like the pride, confidence,
and self acceptance I feel in this...
the brutal honesty...
taking what we want
is the only way
we will be sure to have what we want...
it's the keeping it that can be a challenge...

once again, bo...
enjoy your thought provoking work...flowerforyou:heart:flowerforyou :heart:flowerforyou

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Mon 01/07/13 06:08 AM


I’m sorry if I hurt you
I wish I could say, apologize
But why Give in if you don't have to
Even surrender is taken not given
Sadly away from the view of my window
I stare at the reflection of my naked self;
sick filth; I am no better
As much as I wish I could care I don’t
I walk through my life kicking
everything and everyone in my way
until I get to reach my dream
I fight for the top most seat I can reach
I am not ashamed of looking at myself
I am satisfied with whom I am


I like the pride, confidence,
and self acceptance I feel in this...
the brutal honesty...
taking what we want
is the only way
we will be sure to have what we want...
it's the keeping it that can be a challenge...

once again, bo...
enjoy your thought provoking work...flowerforyou:heart:flowerforyou :heart:flowerforyou

Thank you for the brutal honesty

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Mon 01/07/13 06:09 AM

Really nice enjoyed it and your work is inspiring and will inspire a lot of people to quit trying to be like others and be themselves.....................hope to read more of your work soon good luck and happy new year


Likewise happy & Thank you for your kind words

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Mon 01/07/13 06:14 AM
excellent read.the last three lines hit the hardest for me.thankyou.

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Mon 01/07/13 07:35 AM
I love the way you write Bo...It tells me we are different but alike....

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Mon 01/07/13 07:51 AM

excellent read.the last three lines hit the hardest for me.thankyou.

Thank You
We are as we are

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Mon 01/07/13 07:51 AM

I love the way you write Bo...It tells me we are different but alike....

The irony in that!

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Mon 01/07/13 08:41 AM
Both men and women are alike nowadays..........we cannot blame any one gender..........the world rots because us humans are afaid to get our hands dirty to clean our own house our own world