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Edited by
shapirobo
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Mon 01/07/13 04:14 AM
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I stare at the naked world
This big rotting wound everywhere I look I see disease Infected communities Greed, many mean men selfishness, no one cares everyone’s busy with their own dreams starving kids, a sick rot society rumours of judgement humanity’s sorry excuse for their cowardice babel that everybody will one day pay In what world Dreamers? Everybody is so interested in matters of death too deep in the confusion of its mysterious magic life goes by like a short weak breeze terrorist's experiments of suicide being key A paranoid few who love comic book fiction a little bit too much I think Stories of a god who walked among men then there are the freaks who don't understand beef is just beef this rotten wound, filth, filth ,FILTH I’m sorry if I hurt you I wish I could say, apologize But why Give in if you don't have to Even surrender is taken not given Sadly away from the view of my window I stare at the reflection of my naked self; sick filth; I am no better As much as I wish I could care I don’t I walk through my life kicking everything and everyone in my way until I get to reach my dream I fight for the top most seat I can reach I am not ashamed of looking at myself I am satisfied with whom I am |
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Really nice enjoyed it and your work is inspiring and will inspire a lot of people to quit trying to be like others and be themselves.....................hope to read more of your work soon good luck and happy new year
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I’m sorry if I hurt you I wish I could say, apologize But why Give in if you don't have to Even surrender is taken not given Sadly away from the view of my window I stare at the reflection of my naked self; sick filth; I am no better As much as I wish I could care I don’t I walk through my life kicking everything and everyone in my way until I get to reach my dream I fight for the top most seat I can reach I am not ashamed of looking at myself I am satisfied with whom I am I like the pride, confidence, and self acceptance I feel in this... the brutal honesty... taking what we want is the only way we will be sure to have what we want... it's the keeping it that can be a challenge... once again, bo... enjoy your thought provoking work... |
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I’m sorry if I hurt you I wish I could say, apologize But why Give in if you don't have to Even surrender is taken not given Sadly away from the view of my window I stare at the reflection of my naked self; sick filth; I am no better As much as I wish I could care I don’t I walk through my life kicking everything and everyone in my way until I get to reach my dream I fight for the top most seat I can reach I am not ashamed of looking at myself I am satisfied with whom I am I like the pride, confidence, and self acceptance I feel in this... the brutal honesty... taking what we want is the only way we will be sure to have what we want... it's the keeping it that can be a challenge... once again, bo... enjoy your thought provoking work... Thank you for the brutal honesty |
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Really nice enjoyed it and your work is inspiring and will inspire a lot of people to quit trying to be like others and be themselves.....................hope to read more of your work soon good luck and happy new year Likewise happy & Thank you for your kind words |
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excellent read.the last three lines hit the hardest for me.thankyou.
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I love the way you write Bo...It tells me we are different but alike....
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excellent read.the last three lines hit the hardest for me.thankyou. Thank You We are as we are |
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I love the way you write Bo...It tells me we are different but alike.... The irony in that! |
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Both men and women are alike nowadays..........we cannot blame any one gender..........the world rots because us humans are afaid to get our hands dirty to clean our own house our own world
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