Hello everyone.. I am new to mingle2 and sharing one of my poems (from my blog) as a very 1st post.. lets see hw it goes.. :)

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If you remember the day
when I saw you the first time
and you looked at me, no glanced at me
from the corner of your eye
I could see then, feel then
oh baby, the book in your eye

After this moment
I lost my dreams, lost my sleep
and started looking for you
on every other street
after this moment, don’t know why
wanted to read, wanted to learn
the book in your eye

For seeing you then
I started to pray
after all my try
when you crossed my way
you stared at me
Though with the look of
who is this guy?
but I could read then
the dreams of you, the hopes of you
written in the book in your eye

Hey, now for ever
I want to be with you
I won’t ever let you feel
and let the tears come to you
I don’t care what others think
and what they cry
but I want to keep reading
for whole of my life
oh baby, the book in your eye

If you remember the day
when I saw you the first time
and you looked at me, no glanced at me
from the corner of your eye
I could see then, feel then
oh baby, the book in your eye

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Nice write....

Welcome to Poems & Writing.

Yes, welcome to the writer's forum... we all love a good book to read... and yours has an interesting twist... thank you for sharing...

Good to the last word...

Thank you all.. luks like am gonna have gud time here..

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