Only a single note in her voice orchastrated a mass for the dead? I couldn't be accounted for... for I was uninvited. Resentment is common, or is it the taking out of the context? Describe to me the quality of the wake... addressing her retrospect. No? Then let me save you the suspense by adding the ending to the start. A stone's throw was the distance that had kept us so far apart. And as she lies, lost to the other side of the ground, dressed in dead roses and a baby breath gown... She still would have denied, her bitter pride, as she died with a frown.

I'm sure she must have had her reasons... I like the suspense... I see already you enjoy leaving your reader's intrigued... thank you for sharing...

Hmmm
May she find in her demise
That which has tragically
eluded her so in life

...I like it thanks !