Topic: HOW TO HEAL A BROKEN HEART
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Wed 12/26/12 11:14 PM
by Bo Kibiwot on Thursday, 6 May 2010 at 15:02 ·


A dozen stitches to the heart to heal me of heartaches!
one to take away all these pain.
A second for all the regrets i'm feeling, for the time of my short life that went to waste!

a third to erase the silly lines that came out of your mouth to deceive me, like, " i'd trade a thousand lives for one by your side."
a fourth to take care of the guilt of not messing up your face with my finger nails, after all that you did to me.
a fifth to replace the hate for you locked up in my chest, for forgiveness.
a sixth to pick up the tears i've shed for you.
a seventh to open my eyes and my heart not to be gullible again, not to be blinded into believing you're the gentleman you pretend to be but see you for the devil you really are!
An eighth to wipe away my distrust for men, so i can learn to trust and love someone else worth my loving.
a ninth to erase your memories completely from my brain, so you can be just another shadow that came my way and i never took notice of.
a tenth to change the nightmares where you have your large hands around my neck and i'm almost out of breath as you strungle me, with my pants down as you defile me; for dreams of my prince charming, soon to be, who's nothing like you.

an eleventh to make my broken heart whole again.
a twelfth to place my beautiful smile back where it belongs.
and everyday i pray, may God make it that i never set my eyes on your face ever again.

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Thu 12/27/12 12:06 AM
DEEP. I feel you, and I also empathize with you.

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Thu 12/27/12 12:36 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Thu 12/27/12 12:37 AM
WOW! Intense! Real! Very descriptive... I like and agree... flowerforyou

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Thu 12/27/12 03:14 AM
I can relate to this. In my writing, the one where i wrote, I was adopted by an evil man, with evil hands. I would rather not see him again unless im standing over his grave looking down at his bones beneath the dirt. And if i was standing there, i would have no emotion upon my face. Not even a smile or a smidge of hate. Because i am an angel of god and i can forgive.

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Thu 12/27/12 05:55 AM

DEEP. I feel you, and I also empathize with you.

Thanks...I empathize with me too...hehe

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Thu 12/27/12 05:57 AM

WOW! Intense! Real! Very descriptive... I like and agree... flowerforyou

Funny how you agree...hehe
that's one unhealthy way to cure a heart
a transplant sounds easier

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Thu 12/27/12 05:59 AM

I can relate to this. In my writing, the one where i wrote, I was adopted by an evil man, with evil hands. I would rather not see him again unless im standing over his grave looking down at his bones beneath the dirt. And if i was standing there, i would have no emotion upon my face. Not even a smile or a smidge of hate. Because i am an angel of god and i can forgive.

Only the bravest of us stand on neutral ground in times of war man...My heart goes out to you.