Topic: I Walked Away
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Mon 12/24/12 02:23 AM
I came alive thru play
I felt the warmth that day
I heard all you had to say
I replied without delay
I lived your lie… your way
I was caught up in disarray
I then faced the price I pay
I had nothing else to relay
I quietly walked away
I refused to see you until today

:heart:©AthenaRose 12/24/12:heart:


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Mon 12/24/12 04:24 AM
:thumbsup:

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Mon 12/24/12 05:43 AM
Welcome back.:banana:

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE flowerforyou

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Mon 12/24/12 05:45 AM
nice write flowerforyou

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Mon 12/24/12 06:17 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Mon 12/24/12 06:18 AM
thank you for posting, pg... :smile:

Jeff.. it's good to be back... on this eve of Christmas, I wish you peace and happiness all thru the day too... flowerforyou

penny, thanks... flowerforyou

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Mon 12/24/12 07:44 AM
To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose unto heaven...Merry Christmas Athena!

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Mon 12/24/12 07:54 AM
Nice, and Merry Christmas!

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Mon 12/24/12 08:27 AM

To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose unto heaven...Merry Christmas Athena!


Leigh... Merry Christmas to you too... these words bring pure joy to my senses.. flowerforyou


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Mon 12/24/12 08:28 AM

Nice, and Merry Christmas!


Cutiepie... a very Merry Christmas to you too... flowerforyou

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Tue 12/25/12 05:52 AM
hehe...bitter!!!

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Tue 12/25/12 09:37 PM
Who can write a powerful image, with use of very little word. Must be a hard thing to accomplish, something i wish to learn more.

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Wed 12/26/12 12:16 AM

hehe...bitter!!!


A mixture of emotions... bitter being only one... thank you for your assessment Ray... flowerforyou

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Wed 12/26/12 12:24 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Wed 12/26/12 12:24 AM

Who can write a powerful image, with use of very little word. Must be a hard thing to accomplish, something i wish to learn more.


Hello XBE, welcome to the writers forum... you will find many other more talented writers on this board that can bring complete ideas to life with very few words... this is where I also learn by their example... as you will too... thank you for reading my work... I do appreciate your input... smile2