Topic: Caribbean Wind
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Wed 12/12/12 01:12 AM
Caribbean Wind


High 70’s
with a smooth gust
to round out the elegance
of white sand
and clear
deep blue waters

Once the sun
captures your soul
it’s relentless
in how it devours every ounce
of will power you have
you’re helpless
another victim
of perfect relaxation

Soon
you find
that you can’t help
yourself
as the umbrella drinks
cause you to sway
to the rhythm
of the easy breeze
and the steel drums

So close your eyes
take another sip
feel the warmth
and listen
as the calypso infused waves
wash upon the shore
you are, my friend,
now a part of the Caribbean wind’s beauty


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Wed 12/12/12 01:17 AM
High 70’s
with a smooth gust

Once the sun
captures your soul
it’s relentless
in how it devours every ounce
of will power you have
you’re helpless
another victim

Soon
you find
that you can’t help
yourself

So close your eyes

feel the warmth
and listen

you are, my friend,
now a part of the Caribbean wind’s beauty

How awesome and thrilling.. mig.. I can really get into your way with words too.. :wink:

mig25's photo
Wed 12/12/12 02:01 AM
Thanks Athena . . . now if I can just find the money to go and be a part of my poem life would be great

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Wed 12/12/12 05:59 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Wed 12/12/12 08:23 PM
Just by reading your write MIg, escaping there would be wonderful...