Topic: ~ twice on sunday | |
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you tell me
'write poetry for you' my muse backsup contrary slides away pouting writing is flow it must,wait it crosses me up twice on sunday its an orgasm waiting to happen wanting to happen if im lucky i get both if i give you this poem will you take it will you take it will you take it from me |
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it's sunday, so i read this twice.
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Woah. That's awesome. Great write!
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I enjoyed the subtle implications in this write, teasing.. cool way with words..
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kc....sweet of you to write..
tazzops... ![]() plastic_pancakes...i like the woah.....smile. AthenaRose2...back at you,i may not always comment but i read. |
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LAMom....
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Hope that he took it...
took waiting, took the love offered, in your own time.. I agree with PP... Genius. ![]() |
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Teditis...this poem came from writersblock.....not from which you write of..i thankyou for liking it.
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Well, I ever said that I was perfct in my interpretations, haha.
Sorry for misreading... still enjoyed it. |
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