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Topic: ~ twice on sunday
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 12/09/12 04:38 PM
you tell me 'write poetry for you' my muse backsup contrary slides away pouting writing is flow it must,wait it crosses me up twice on sunday its an orgasm waiting to happen wanting to happen if im lucky i get both if i give you this poem will you take it will you take it will you take it from me

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 12/09/12 04:40 PM
it's sunday, so i read this twice. sweet both times!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 12/09/12 06:04 PM


plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Sun 12/09/12 07:04 PM
Woah. That's awesome. Great write!

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Mon 12/10/12 01:27 AM
I enjoyed the subtle implications in this write, teasing.. cool way with words..

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 12/10/12 06:03 AM
kc....sweet of you to write.. tazzops... plastic_pancakes...i like the woah.....smile. AthenaRose2...back at you,i may not always comment but i read.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 12/10/12 12:09 PM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 12/10/12 08:34 PM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 12/11/12 04:45 AM
LAMom.... Up2Us...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Fri 02/01/13 01:35 PM
Hope that he took it... took waiting, took the love offered, in your own time.. I agree with PP... Genius.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 02/01/13 02:40 PM
Teditis...this poem came from writersblock.....not from which you write of..i thankyou for liking it.

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Fri 02/01/13 02:56 PM
Well, I ever said that I was perfct in my interpretations, haha. Sorry for misreading... still enjoyed it.

threepurpleroses Joined Sun 01/13/13 Posts: 73	Fri 02/01/13 06:43 PM
The flow of poetry must open at its own time, in its' own way. It must feel right for it to happen. I agree it is like an orgasm waiting to happen, once it starts, you cannot stop til it is finished, and oh those feelings are so alive then!

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