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she closes her eyes
and dances an empty place then a sprit touches and accelerates her pace she dances the dark to music without words with no one to see her she utters not but in her mind she can see earth's garden and countless birds that fly as they glide in unison, as if one in the air they dance their own and she asks, why must I be alone? a moment's pause! she loses step! but regains balance then is on again with talent and skill and all that she finds in the gift of her nature she climbs to the skies above the birds, such joy to behold! now that she sees from a height far above the highest of all trees her pace quickens but a wild wind forms the clouds overhead are in angry form some thunder, and some rain, to warn the heavens shall not let you stay in a flash she is home with a tired stare thinking about what her effort is for she grows faint and fades and looks all around with not a soul to see her and folds on the ground he cannot save her he cannot touch he can only watch on the other side of some reality somewhere far, far away two lovers never meet |
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it sounds so final...
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Now that we have talked,
![]() ![]() The way you have captured this girl, her journey, and the energy that compels her to fly high above her loneliness.. reaching out.. only to never embrace her lover, the one who nourishes the lover in her is intriguing.. I very much enjoyed looking deeper into this.. ![]() |
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Sun 12/09/12 10:13 AM
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yes. She is a woman that can soar to the skies but she can't live in that happy state that she finds. The one thing that's missing in her life keeps pulling her back down.
also in the last lines i was trying to point out that although missed opportunities are common, they are still very sad. Thank you Athena ![]() |
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What is it, Sinner, that's missing and pulling her down..
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Thank you.
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okay.. i understand.. thank you for clarifying.. i agree.. loneliness can be very depressing.. so it's a good thing she can escape through her imagination.. huh?
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