Topic: written on republic day (mine.not yours. most probably not.)
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Thu 12/06/12 10:40 AM
red cheeked girl with seline eyes,
silk sleek hair and b-cup size,
i like the way you blow smoke rings..
with puffy lips sweet angel darjeeling.

blue eyed fair skinned ice maiden,
with a knack for driving men insane,
i like the way the kohl smears
your eyelids beneath black viel kashmir.

dusky selph like lass from sea
who makes me sip coconut tea,
smouldering iris curved hips i'm lost!
sexy brain kerela, i miss you the most.

_to the most beautiful women of the land.

DaySinner's photo
Thu 12/06/12 10:46 AM
Edited by DaySinner on Thu 12/06/12 10:50 AM
wow, this is really cool. I like this! :thumbsup:
you are making me look things up all over the place.
you must be from India. Welcome to this forum!
your poetry is rich

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Thu 12/06/12 01:50 PM
Yes, faehiir, love the fresh air you breathe into praising women... truly magical. welcome flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Thu 12/06/12 03:49 PM
i hope you give us more faehiir, this is very cool,
hip and full of bling ;)~

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Thu 12/06/12 07:47 PM
aww..thanks guys! :-) :-) *smile smile*..i wrote this in college..

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Thu 12/06/12 09:55 PM
I enjoyed your write.flowerforyou
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