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Topic: naked eye
DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Wed 12/05/12 10:15 AM Edited by DaySinner on Wed 12/05/12 10:52 AM
is this ballet? or is this a princess? clad incandescence child of the moon on the tips of her toes she twirls on emotion with grace, beauty, and skill she takes my heart radiating love, intelligence, innocence she has wings to fly and purity of essence i fear if i corrupt i don't want to interrupt what I behold this delicate angel a celestial nymph fragile to the touch a gift to the world this secret from the heavens

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 12/05/12 11:31 AM
This is so beautiful and heartfelt, Sinner..

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Wed 12/05/12 11:43 AM Edited by DaySinner on Wed 12/05/12 11:55 AM
thank you Athena you are my inspiration as well!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 12/05/12 12:56 PM


DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Wed 12/05/12 11:18 PM
thank you 2kids. I surprised more people didn't like this one. I thought it was my best.

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