Topic: LOVE
zeeRubby's photo
Tue 12/04/12 04:55 AM
it stood far away from me. but still felt so close, i tried so much to reach out to it, but was far away, far so far away from me,a space in me craved for it, wanna fight for it, but u cant get wat is not available to you, i kept searching, each time i felt have had hold on it, it was just an illusion, a dream a fantaxy and selfish desire i just wish to quench, should u find love some day, please ask him to locate me.
Thank u



DaySinner's photo
Tue 12/04/12 09:43 AM
Nice. I like the way it builds and then "should you find love some day, please ask him to locate me." I really liked the way you closed it.