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Topic: Each and Every Road
AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/04/12 12:39 AM Edited by AthenaRose2 on Tue 12/04/12 12:40 AM
When you find that special kind of love Breathe it all in, and give it all back… Fill your self up to your very core Until you can’t stand it any more Know it may not come your way again And relish every moment until the end Never think you can have it all your way Always keep an open mind, and pray... God will show us the way our feet should go Are we ready to walk each and every road? Copyright © Athena Rose 12/04/12

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 12/04/12 03:33 AM
Amen

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/04/12 04:51 AM
Jeff... I've missed you my friend.. thank you for the flowers...

Muaness Joined Mon 11/05/12 Posts: 2993	Tue 12/04/12 06:08 AM Edited by Muaness on Tue 12/04/12 06:09 AM
Never think you can have it all your way... Are we ready to walk each and every road? Nice one. Something most of us seem to ignore or perhaps don't take serious is the fact that it takes more to enjoy love than it takes to find it.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/04/12 06:55 AM
Yes, Muaness, the finding is much easier... it's the willingness to compromise and allow it to be what it is to the fullest degree that's the tricky part. Thank you for your input, I like the way you think..

Muaness Joined Mon 11/05/12 Posts: 2993	Tue 12/04/12 07:56 AM
...I like the way you think.. Thank you. I must say, the creativity in your work wakes the dormant part of my reasoning.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/04/12 08:32 AM
And this pleases me greatly.. WAKE UP! Muaness, let's play..

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Tue 12/04/12 09:29 AM
a beautiful poem. you have such a lovely heart.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/04/12 09:38 AM Edited by AthenaRose2 on Tue 12/04/12 09:39 AM
Thank you, Sinner.. your kind words make me smile..

Muaness Joined Mon 11/05/12 Posts: 2993	Tue 12/04/12 01:10 PM
.. WAKE UP! Muaness, let's play... For me to run, I have to walk I should watch the play I should see what the player feels I should see what the player saw I should see what the player never saw I should learn the rules I should know the rules I should use the rules To play the way the player played To play the way the player never played Only then would the player be proud, Proud of really being a player Proud that I have watched Proud that the play was no play I should let you know this, player I look up to you.

Muaness Joined Mon 11/05/12 Posts: 2993	Tue 12/04/12 01:10 PM Edited by Muaness on Tue 12/04/12 01:16 PM
It did love to see "©Athena Rose 2013" on print!

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/04/12 03:08 PM
This is so radically cool.. Muaness… Every step of the way... I especially relate to… , “I should use the rules” “To play the way the player never played,” and, “Proud that the play was no play”.. I love these points... I like this level of play..

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1542	Tue 12/04/12 03:11 PM
Ah the art of a real poet. I love this one!!

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/04/12 03:40 PM
Thank you mig.. but I feel so insignificant when compared to the real talent here.. I am in awe of each..

Muaness Joined Mon 11/05/12 Posts: 2993	Wed 12/05/12 10:14 AM
Thank you mig.. but I feel so insignificant when compared to the real talent here.. I am in awe of each.. Believe me, Mig isn't mincing words and neither is it words of flattery. Your lyrical content with its correlation makes your style unique.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 12/05/12 11:46 AM
Muaness, it makes me happy to see others happy...