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Topic: WHERE I STAND
flech11 Joined Mon 06/04/12 Posts: 67	Tue 11/27/12 10:37 AM
this world has changed not much left whats left goes unsaid your right always wher how could i ever have something to say please leave us alone were here to help not to take like your in numb with truth that lies in my face if i give all i have would you stop and think again if my worth is to small ill give you take im left with less your right on your way

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 11/27/12 10:49 AM


AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 11/29/12 01:49 AM
"I give all I have" "I'll give, you take, I'm left with less, your right on your way" This piece makes me feel twisted flech... I wish I had more to say... but all I can do is feel it with you..

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Thu 11/29/12 02:25 AM
Pretty good poem

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 11/29/12 05:23 AM
Good morning young prodigy!..Another great poem....You could be right, I hope not...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 11/29/12 06:22 AM


flech11 Joined Mon 06/04/12 Posts: 67	Fri 11/30/12 12:40 AM
thanks for the sweet! comments everyone :)

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